Review swap
XenaReigns_1 Done
Ak02 Done
B_l_a_n_k_2167 Thanks, I will check your work. Please allow me time for me to write the review.
Allen_Clay012 take your time
Review Swap, can you guys read the the last 10 or so chapters starting from my OneNight Arc? I have quite a few chapters and want to understand how my writing is progressing. I'll read the same amount of chapters as you guys do though, preferably leave some comments if you guys see any mistakes, drop your links in response
[https://www.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505](https://)
B_l_a_n_k_2167 yo I read it and left some comments. I don't want to rate your novel low so here's my review
Well written, nothing particularly wrong but doesn't hook my interest in any particular way, it feels like the author is just describing the scene in an elegant way while sometimes neglecting the tone of a scene or the emotions a character should be feeling in the moment, I like the story premise, with a near apathetic Main Character, but I recommend the author to read or perhaps watch examples like Grand Admiral Thrawn who while apathetic creates an atmosphere of intimidation while not being. a bad guy outright while not being a good guy, sort of a neutral chaos which i think your aiming for with Marshall,
drop an honest review of my newest three chapters please,
ForerunnerOfSky hey, wanna swap with me too? her's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/isekai-i-a-powerlifter-awakened-in-the-world-of-titans_28583756308761605
Lets swap. Here is mine.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/blade-and-miracle_28408630100580205
B_l_a_n_k_2167 The review has been written.
B_l_a_n_k_2167 I apologize if my review took so long. I will review your work once I am done catching up with my updates.
Hello! Mines is right here!
http://wbnv.in/a/69iB497
Krea and Zi Adventures is a mystical tale about two girls. Full of action and drama, read it now!
ForerunnerOfSky sure but my review or feedback will take time. I am still behind in chapters.
The_Drunkencrater Heres my review from reading up to chapter 10,
Has a interesting and unique premise, the first person perspective is a bit unconventional but can work, its a bit to lighthearted for my liking but thats personal preference. Action is a little bit dissapointing it doesn't have much detail or depth to the actions, the character's thoughts and motivations are very well written, solid grammar has some good moments of humor. I think it has potential to grow but just needs lots of improvement and eventually you'll get there.
I think currently from the first 10 chapters I would rate it, 3.5 stars out of 5
P.S : dont forget to read the latest 10 chapters of mine, please, preferably from my One Night Arc, chapter 43
