mdrm Hi I just wanted to thank you for reading my new work I'm the demon lord but I died and now I'm the hero's best friend. Thank you for reading, also I'm going to read your novel, once I'm free. :)

      Bibliophile_Anna
      'Issues' I've found(IMO):
      1. The title - These types of titles are very repetitive in romance novels just like those with 'heavenly' or 'rebirth' they are kind of a turn off
      2. Synopsis - Too long and some grammar mistakes. You should simplify it, you're adding too much detail
      3. Grammar - Very few grammar mistakes; 'Jia Li's mother reminded her upon seeing her 𝒓𝒂𝒏(running) π’•π’‰π’“π’π’–π’ˆπ’‰(toward) the door'

          Hi people! I created this thread so that new authors could get honest feedbacks and get more views. This thread does not have a leader and I'm definitely not going to be the one ( my knowledge in language and management is way too lacking).

          this place is something like a chat, so feel free to speak your thoughts out, but be mindful of your tone.
          Thank you and I'm sorry for telling this so late.

            mdrm Thank you for this thread.

            In fact, I was wondering if my novel was interesting. Could someone read my first chapter and say me if it's looks interesting? I mean, is the debut of my story make you want to read more? Is it original?
            I wish to have something different even if I know that doing a non-mainstream on this site.
            Thank you to give me some pointers too.my novel is: 'Beyond the Mask'
            (Sorry I'm on phone, don't have the link now ')

            Edit;
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/12134991606975905/Beyond-the-Mask

            • mdrm replied to this.

                KimSasha It was reeeeaaaaly interesting!!!!!!!!!

                It felt realy fresh for me and it did make me read more. Keep up the good work!

                    mdrm Thank you~

                    I am happy to have achieved my goal then. I wanted to do something different. I hope people will appreciate it and give it a chance since it is far from being the kind of story that there is on the site. I take a risk, but who doesn't try anything, has nothing.

                        KimSasha
                        True. I hope that you will continue your work and get what you wantπŸ˜‰

                            mdrm what is your discord Tag? For example mine is #5546?
                            You can add friends by:
                            1. Go to the toolbars
                            2. Click "Friends"
                            3. Click "Add Friend"
                            4. Type in the username and discord tag.

                            Example: Dawsonrose#5546

                            Try it if it is works!

                            • mdrm replied to this.

                                Misguided_Rooster I appreciate your honest feedback and really grateful for the suggestions you shared. I'll work on the things you'd said. I hope to make it better. Thank you so much! 😊

                                  Dawsonrose
                                  I send a friend request to you. could you please accept it?

                                      Yuukiko
                                      Thanks for the read! It was really interesting. I'll wait for more chapters from you)

                                          Thanks for you valuable review :)

                                            Hi :D It's my first time posting a story, and it's an entry for the Writing Prompt Contest #32 (System, female lead). I only have four chapters out (will be seven by Sunday), so it's totally fine if you feel that's not enough to base a fair review on. I would already be grateful for views, comments, library adds, or (ehem) votes using power stones if you happen to like what I have written so far. Please excuse my shamelessness. XD

                                            Thank you very much!

                                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/12203458605078605/Lost-in-Character%3A-Transmigration-Chronicles-of-a-Reluctant-Heroine

                                            P.S. I'll also be looking at some of the books posted here, and if there's enough chapters (i.e., more than mine lol), I'll leave reviews in the next few days. :)

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