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    ForerunnerOfSky First of all, the story is very descriptive, in a good way. I love the time taken to let the reader experience the moment through your descriptions. I am not lost in any way reading this. The MC is very relatable, in a way down to earth and human. What I mean is he has emotions and his actions kind of reflect these emotions without you putting any emphasis on them. It makes the reader, me, empathize with the MC, Gyun, on a deeper level and be more immersed in the story flow. I can tell the MC is somewhat broken inside, unpredictable too. I have to mention that your story development is more unique than most. It made me interested in following up on more updates and curious about any plot twists. This story has a charm and active energy to it that draws you into reading more and more until the latest updated chapter.
    I haven't found any downsides to it, the grammar is up to point and the dialogs are realistic enough. Your writing style is specially adapted to you so I am no judge on that, you pick how you want the story told.
    PS:// You got yourself a new follower to your book. Please update it 😁
    I can review it like this in the book if you would like~~

        XuXinyang Thanks; I leave a few comments and review your novel honestly if you want me to. Have you read my latest two chapters? I took a three-month break after burning out, so I'm worried about the quality after returning.

            ForerunnerOfSky The writing style essentially remains the same. It has an intriguing pull that leaves one curious. Especially when you wonder if the MC is going to survive. I like the fact that you don't describe it explicitly that he experiencing another world. The subtle seamless switch is good. You were kind of very specific on time before the latest two chapters....a difference I spotted but it doesn't make much of a difference.
            These are my thoughts on the book: Could you introduce the Rangers more....I mean, it is a temporary point in the book but skimming through it seems a bit rushed. It leaves the readers with lots of questions, like what is the background, how do the people look, which models of weapons do they use??? I could take way more chapters and world-building for every scenario.
            And the point at which the MC puts himself in danger most of the time...I would love it if he develops into a more complex schemer who thinks of how to survive...it seems a bit reckless to rush towards death when you have already experienced it...It takes way more before you can be numb to death. He should kind of strive to survive more, and value himself more. The Ranger arc is awesome though. It is well-rounded with different compositions that make it complete.
            All in all, it is good and a good continuation of the other chapters.

                zeroshyne There are many grammar mistakes. Rather, it is the word arrangement that makes it hard to keep up with the flow even when you know what the author is trying to convey, this drops interest in many even when they find the story itself very intriguing.
                The story setting is nice and complete with the use of the right vocabulary and all. It fits well in the martial world adaptation. I find the interactions between characters quite wholesome. The naming sense....it is quite humoring. This is a good way to keep the readers interested and avoid confusion with complicated names.
                All in all the book is good. Just a few changes and it will be souring.

                    XuXinyang
                    Ty, its from an anime called fate/grand rder if you're interested, I'm gonna change it soon to something original if my book gets bigger

                      Revamping12345 I was kinda confused at the first chapter since it was all something I couldn't understand but all is well. It was English after all, Phew~
                      It is my first time reading such a trope/genre and setting so this opinion is not based on the book concept.
                      The book is very simplistic and has little depth in character. I am not sure if it is because you plan to do more development in the future. I mean, he is someone who has seen primordial and even fought chaos. It should be given he is more...complex than average humans.
                      As I reader, I find it hard sympathizing with him since not much of his emotions are known to us. You should make use of descriptive writing , facial expressions, real world estimations to make us a part of the book as well. Spice it up.
                      The synopsis as intriguing as it is, it is also very confusing on the plot.
                      You are using the first person's POV which can be tricky. The remedy to that is setting though bubbles to show his thoughts. Using body language to read others emotions or thoughts. Being more expressive and descriptive in what the MC sees, hears, feels etc. He is our window to the book world after all.
                      To round it up, the idea is amazing really. It is original and I would love to read more if you update.
                      ME:// Let me know if you would like a review. Please review my book as well.

                          XuXinyang thank you for your feedback on my novel. I am reworking them.

                          Also, I read the first two chapters of blade and miracle. The beginning of the story is a little slow. However, I do like the pacing of the story so far. It's pull you in and you want to know what is next for these set of characters. Also, I like the name are simple and easy to remember. There was a few parts where didn't make sense and I had to reread it. Overall, I like where the story is heading and I will b adding it to my library. Keep up the good work.

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