guys ... did you encounter a problem when you tried to publish your first chapter? when they ask me for my email and i give it to them they say "EMAIL ALREADY EXIST" what is thisss??? it is driving me crazy

    MeloncholyKay Sorry? If you're not joking, I'm sorry, but I didn't receive any reviews from posting here (or anywhere else really). People here just don't really give those out so easily (I think? Maybe only to me?) Anyway, sorry for breathing

        HeavenShatterer Make sure you're signed into the proper account. That being said, if you sign in with facebook, google or the other option besides login with email, you'll have a seperate account from when you sign in with "login with your email."

        I found this out when I signed in with my Gmail, but when I sign in with email, it's a different account. So I have two accounts with one email oddly enough. So you'll have to tinker with that.

          MeloncholyKay
          Overlord_Venus

          Guys come on T.T
          I mean, thank you so much for the compliment, but "making you feel inferior" -- reading that made my blood run cold (literally. I didn't know there was a reason that expression exists). I'm probably a lot older than you guys, I've had more years of practice (and wasted so much more time "studying" by binge-reading/watching stories :P). I wish I started serializing way earlier, I could also have practiced having a tough skin. Sorry for this largely aimless reply, guys, just woke up :grin: thanks again

                So i have a rule on qidian original section that i judge the whole webnovel by its synopsis, yours is written very poorly so i won't even bother wasting my time reading your work, but i will point a few errors in your synopsis since i'm in a good mood.

                Avery" FemmeFoxtrot" Bailey??????????? what are these quotation marks for?
                was diagnosed with a terminal disease that was untreatable. Terminal disease = untreatable hence why its called terminal, so saying it twice only makes it sound silly.
                The next sentence is just a mess i won't even bother with it.

                Next paragraph starts as if its a continuation of the previous one and it doesn't make sense, then if you keep reading it further you feel a slight twinge of pain in your left hemisphere as you try to deduce the meaning of that sentence.

                I rate it 1.5/10, you know the alphabet and how to arrange the words into something that resembles a sentence.

                On a serious note, if you are truly passionate and want to write then you must practice a lot. Write more and read more to improve your vocabulary, and most importantly you need to study some English grammar. To me it seems like you never read a book that was written in English and you try to mimic the closest thing you know, the webnovels on this website. And i'm telling you to not do it, because most of the translated work here is not really English.

                There are many FREE online courses for writing and some of them are even on Youtube. My favorite fantasy author Brandon Sanderson has some great books that might interest you and he also has free lectures on youtube on how to write a story.

                  WinterBud welp, it's not the way you think, it's just an apt description to tell that yours have given me a few insights the learn ( it's like this)

                      Overlord_Venus It's fine, I understood after I calmed down. As a side note, I don't even want to read the things I wrote when I was younger (but I do, because I'm an M)

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