Elude Let me know once you decide to write a novel ๐Ÿ˜‚ And I'm glad that you enjoyed it since I'm still working on how to write a proper story๐Ÿ˜‚ Thank you for giving it a try ๐Ÿ˜Š

Elude do you mind reviewing mine? i've heard you reviewed a lot of novels honestly, i think i also need one. there are only seven chapters tho.

    yosi

    When you end a sentence, use a space after the period.
    " end. I " example.

    If your asking a question, even if in novels, use a question mark.

    Please use commas.

    On the phone, so i cant pick apart your story to a further degree, but you should look into getting an editor.

    I like the idea and look forward where you take it

      BerriApplepi maybe not use "( )" in your story >-<

      You can put your thoughts at the end, because im not sure if those are the character thoughts or youts.

        MeloncholyKay Oh! Okay! Thank you โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ It's actually the character's but I'll go change it. ๐Ÿ˜Š

          MeloncholyKay
          I've read a few paragraphs and I think its nice. I would love to read it.

            Overlord_Venus
            Had to stop reading. Please put spaces after commas. ",". If you're on a computer with english settings crtl+ f. Search using , or . Then hit the space bar it should highlight the entered stuff

              Adraik Sorry man, but i had a hard tine getting through ththe beggining. I ended up rearranging sentences in my head>.< one particular annoyance was the beggining, the present speak then jumping to past tense.

              Annoyance was when he entered the room and you used - - instead of commas. I suggest running it through grammarly

              Another was "The Royal Family Castle"
              It should be "the Royal Family's castle" " 's" for a single entity's posession etc

              I cant pick it apart in detail, as im on my phone, but maybe when i do ill go into detail

                BerriApplepi make sure have it downloaded then you need to have a link to the server. Inkstone has a link in the bottom left corner

                As for mobile idk

                  Elude how do I get people to read my book "Superfail"? The one review I got said nothing about the book. PS can you check out my book?

                    BerriApplepi Grammarly salesperson here. If you want to improve your grammar, try out that service to start with, it's free :grin:

                      guys ... did you encounter a problem when you tried to publish your first chapter? when they ask me for my email and i give it to them they say "EMAIL ALREADY EXIST" what is thisss??? it is driving me crazy

                        MeloncholyKay Sorry? If you're not joking, I'm sorry, but I didn't receive any reviews from posting here (or anywhere else really). People here just don't really give those out so easily (I think? Maybe only to me?) Anyway, sorry for breathing

                          HeavenShatterer Make sure you're signed into the proper account. That being said, if you sign in with facebook, google or the other option besides login with email, you'll have a seperate account from when you sign in with "login with your email."

                          I found this out when I signed in with my Gmail, but when I sign in with email, it's a different account. So I have two accounts with one email oddly enough. So you'll have to tinker with that.

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