MeloncholyKay
I've read a few paragraphs and I think its nice. I would love to read it.
Read my story?
Overlord_Venus
Had to stop reading. Please put spaces after commas. ",". If you're on a computer with english settings crtl+ f. Search using , or . Then hit the space bar it should highlight the entered stuff
Adraik Sorry man, but i had a hard tine getting through ththe beggining. I ended up rearranging sentences in my head>.< one particular annoyance was the beggining, the present speak then jumping to past tense.
Annoyance was when he entered the room and you used - - instead of commas. I suggest running it through grammarly
Another was "The Royal Family Castle"
It should be "the Royal Family's castle" " 's" for a single entity's posession etc
I cant pick it apart in detail, as im on my phone, but maybe when i do ill go into detail
BerriApplepi make sure have it downloaded then you need to have a link to the server. Inkstone has a link in the bottom left corner
As for mobile idk
yangsterlosio Go onto the main site, around your profile picture there should be a button saying earn more stones
Elude how do I get people to read my book "Superfail"? The one review I got said nothing about the book. PS can you check out my book?
Oi! Let me in on this I need a review too oi!!
MeloncholyKay please read my book as well I'll check it out and leave a comment :)
BerriApplepi Grammarly salesperson here. If you want to improve your grammar, try out that service to start with, it's free :grin:
Gonna join in on this too! Any feedback is a good feedback, guys
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12203458605078605
Thanks, I'll be going over yours too :)
SuperFail
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11598545905447305 cough I came back because I forgot to add my book cough
MeloncholyKay I did use the spaces, maybe it didn't work in inkstone, I'll change it, thanks
WinterBud You can gladly fuck off and just take all my 5-star chapter reviews and my sub. >;[
Make me feel inferior.
DragonKnight531 What's with the format...?
guys ... did you encounter a problem when you tried to publish your first chapter? when they ask me for my email and i give it to them they say "EMAIL ALREADY EXIST" what is thisss??? it is driving me crazy
MeloncholyKay Sorry? If you're not joking, I'm sorry, but I didn't receive any reviews from posting here (or anywhere else really). People here just don't really give those out so easily (I think? Maybe only to me?) Anyway, sorry for breathing
WinterBud It was a joke.
Hi!
I would love to get some suggestion on my writing as well.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12215177006104305/The-Hero's-Supplier
Thank You
HeavenShatterer Make sure you're signed into the proper account. That being said, if you sign in with facebook, google or the other option besides login with email, you'll have a seperate account from when you sign in with "login with your email."
I found this out when I signed in with my Gmail, but when I sign in with email, it's a different account. So I have two accounts with one email oddly enough. So you'll have to tinker with that.
MeloncholyKay Ok, thanks, that still counts as feedback