Read my story plz? Give me two stone if you find it bad. 1 if good ;>
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12020018805773305
Read my story?
MeloncholyKay well, can you check mine, too? https://m.webnovel.com/book/12137193405983005
MeloncholyKay i have no stones left, but i can see your novel is promising. A female lead and video games is a nice mix for me.
Sure~ would it be fine if you check mine too?
Lets exchange reviews
Title: Choosing the Perfect Husband
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12099559305923005
Reinesse you definitely need some light editing, but you still peeked my interest
BerriApplepi I tried to read, but i kept getting hung up on the grammar. Have you triedd contacting LightHouse on the Inkstone Discord ?
Elude Let me know once you decide to write a novel And I'm glad that you enjoyed it since I'm still working on how to write a proper story
Thank you for giving it a try
MeloncholyKay Nope, I haven't tried it yet since I don't have a discord xD
I'm still working on my grammars tho hahaha that's why I decided to write so that I can improve
I dont have stones left
How can i earn spirit stones anyway??
Check my book too it only has one chapter so it won't take much time and please give me feedback https://m.webnovel.com/book/11888098305596105
BerriApplepi definitely haha. You should definitely get one. People there can give you some amazing advice!
MeloncholyKay Okay! I'll go get one! Thank you for this
When you end a sentence, use a space after the period.
" end. I " example.
If your asking a question, even if in novels, use a question mark.
Please use commas.
On the phone, so i cant pick apart your story to a further degree, but you should look into getting an editor.
I like the idea and look forward where you take it
BerriApplepi maybe not use "( )" in your story >-<
You can put your thoughts at the end, because im not sure if those are the character thoughts or youts.
MeloncholyKay Oh! Okay! Thank you โงโโฆ It's actually the character's but I'll go change it.
MeloncholyKay How can I join a chat in discord?
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Can someone pls read my story ?
I'll read yours instead too... :)
and pls give me feedback......
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10530189005055505/Between-Light-%26-Dark
Can someone check out my novel and point out my mistakes
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12200080106081005
MeloncholyKay
I've read a few paragraphs and I think its nice. I would love to read it.
Overlord_Venus
Had to stop reading. Please put spaces after commas. ",". If you're on a computer with english settings crtl+ f. Search using , or . Then hit the space bar it should highlight the entered stuff
Adraik Sorry man, but i had a hard tine getting through ththe beggining. I ended up rearranging sentences in my head>.< one particular annoyance was the beggining, the present speak then jumping to past tense.
Annoyance was when he entered the room and you used - - instead of commas. I suggest running it through grammarly
Another was "The Royal Family Castle"
It should be "the Royal Family's castle" " 's" for a single entity's posession etc
I cant pick it apart in detail, as im on my phone, but maybe when i do ill go into detail
BerriApplepi make sure have it downloaded then you need to have a link to the server. Inkstone has a link in the bottom left corner
As for mobile idk
yangsterlosio Go onto the main site, around your profile picture there should be a button saying earn more stones
Elude how do I get people to read my book "Superfail"? The one review I got said nothing about the book. PS can you check out my book?
Oi! Let me in on this I need a review too oi!!
MeloncholyKay please read my book as well I'll check it out and leave a comment :)
BerriApplepi Grammarly salesperson here. If you want to improve your grammar, try out that service to start with, it's free :grin:
Gonna join in on this too! Any feedback is a good feedback, guys
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12203458605078605
Thanks, I'll be going over yours too :)
SuperFail
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11598545905447305 cough I came back because I forgot to add my book cough
MeloncholyKay I did use the spaces, maybe it didn't work in inkstone, I'll change it, thanks
WinterBud You can gladly fuck off and just take all my 5-star chapter reviews and my sub. >;[
Make me feel inferior.
DragonKnight531 What's with the format...?
guys ... did you encounter a problem when you tried to publish your first chapter? when they ask me for my email and i give it to them they say "EMAIL ALREADY EXIST" what is thisss??? it is driving me crazy
MeloncholyKay Sorry? If you're not joking, I'm sorry, but I didn't receive any reviews from posting here (or anywhere else really). People here just don't really give those out so easily (I think? Maybe only to me?) Anyway, sorry for breathing
WinterBud It was a joke.
Hi!
I would love to get some suggestion on my writing as well.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12215177006104305/The-Hero's-Supplier
Thank You
HeavenShatterer Make sure you're signed into the proper account. That being said, if you sign in with facebook, google or the other option besides login with email, you'll have a seperate account from when you sign in with "login with your email."
I found this out when I signed in with my Gmail, but when I sign in with email, it's a different account. So I have two accounts with one email oddly enough. So you'll have to tinker with that.
MeloncholyKay Ok, thanks, that still counts as feedback