Forsaken1 You do remember that he said he'd been writing for 20+ years, right? When will your dream come true then?! XD I support your endeavor. 
Anyway, need me to review yours? I won't do editing anymore, especially yours with Clowniac already helping. Hmmp
While I agree Clown is far better than me, I did his/her? not use his work, so everything is my writing and I took inspiration from his changes.
anyways I would love your input clowniac has not commented on the story at all, also I have edited the chapters, after his comments!
Forsaken1 Will do. But probably won't be able to post it this week. 
And I'll base my rating/review on the criteria on this site, same as what I did with DragonKnight531's.
Clowniac Noted, thank you I'll.use that to motivate myself! Its not the attention you get that matter but the work you make that you can be proud of. At least that's how I took it. (ｑο½₯Οο½₯ｑ)
I think the site is too friendly,
Be evil you can get a 4/5 with a 1 grammar score.
Clowniac eh? (Β΄ο½₯_ο½₯`) I never once said i was upset. I was just curious how people get noticed. My book is nooooowhere neeeear ready for a large audience viewing. 
. Like do people just post here and people check there book out? I only got reviews because I asked for them. I'm assuming you would have to do the same. The problem, which i stated was i dont use Facebook or any social media except maybe google+ but theirs no readers there. their mostly just memers.
Forsaken1 Well, my rating for DragonKnight531 was 2.4 if I remember correctly and that's with a 2 on grammar. 
DazzlingGem sound good.
DazzlingGem ooof. I deserve that. I just wrote and didn't look back. Lazy writer.
DragonKnight531 Nah, you just probably lack practice. Currently, I write and post without trying to edit as well. Had to to release a stable amount of chapters. 
Forsaken1
Oh, well ok then
DazzlingGem oh! I thought it was just me.
DazzlingGem
My deepest secret...I do the same
UnjustlyUnderpaid (ΰ² _ΰ² )/ your secret is kinda safe with me. Trust.
I hate everyone above this post... my first drafts= unreadable. then again I do not use backspace when I write them...
