DragonKnight531 You've written 3 pages in 2 months and you're upset its not super popular or getting a ton of attention? I mean, I'm a pretty slow writer by this site's standards, and I put out a couple pages a DAY. =P

You've gotta write a LOT. You've gotta edit a LOT. You have to CONSTANTLY be trying to improve your craft through reading, studying other styles, and implementing feedback in a serious and structured manner.

And you have to make peace with the fact that you've gotta be really good to catch people's attention when surrounded by so many other talented people.

Success isn't just gonna fall into your lap because you quite literally put in the bare minimum possible effort =P

      Clowniac But you are! πŸ˜… I've seen your posts here and your edit of Forsaken1's, uh, was that his first chapter? Anyway, that thread he made. Comparing it to what I did with DragonKnight531's was like, uh, I can't think of anything. Just that yours was better! 😀

          Forsaken1 You do remember that he said he'd been writing for 20+ years, right? When will your dream come true then?! XD I support your endeavor. πŸ‘

          Anyway, need me to review yours? I won't do editing anymore, especially yours with Clowniac already helping. Hmmp

              DazzlingGem

              While I agree Clown is far better than me, I did his/her? not use his work, so everything is my writing and I took inspiration from his changes.

              anyways I would love your input clowniac has not commented on the story at all, also I have edited the chapters, after his comments!

                  Forsaken1 clowniac has not commented on the story at all,

                  Wat. Yes I have, ya dingus! >.>

                  Edit: wait, no, you're right. I've only commented on writing style. (goes and hides in corner)

                    Clowniac Noted, thank you I'll.use that to motivate myself! Its not the attention you get that matter but the work you make that you can be proud of. At least that's how I took it. (ｑο½₯Ο‰ο½₯ｑ)

                      Clowniac eh? (Β΄ο½₯_ο½₯`) I never once said i was upset. I was just curious how people get noticed. My book is nooooowhere neeeear ready for a large audience viewing. πŸ˜‚. Like do people just post here and people check there book out? I only got reviews because I asked for them. I'm assuming you would have to do the same. The problem, which i stated was i dont use Facebook or any social media except maybe google+ but theirs no readers there. their mostly just memers.

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