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WinterBud Thanks, I actually have no previous experience writing, save for a short story contest No use crying over spilled oil.

I have never been in the military, but I did do some research on it, to make it seem more believable.

And the prologue, before John dies, that was actually my story for the first writing prompts contest. I tried to do something different with it. Instead of focusing on what happens after reincarnating, the story would be entirely about the events leading up to the reincarnation. In the end however, I decided to keep on writing, and the prologue became kinda awkward because of that.

JohnnyKbca I see. Great job on your first effort. :)
I think it's a common mistake to try to smoothen awkward parts by piling on more details. The solution's usually the opposite, though. If you're going to rewrite in the future, try to isolate the truly indispensible details and let go of the rest.

WinterBud I was shocked when you reviewed my novel even though I didn't see you reply in this forum post. Well, I'll still swap with you. I'll do it either today or the next. I'll see if could go home early to read

JA_Anton hey, can I join too?

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12103023806926205

But, fair warning. It's a full BL

existing Thanks, I'm beginning to think I may have misunderstood the mechanics of review swaps. I thought it was free-for-all if you post in a thread like this, but maybe most people are just asking to swap with the OP? :joy: I was finding it a bit strange how everyone seems to be waiting for everyone else to give the first review haha, maybe that was why.

JohnnyKbca Noted :) I'll add your story in my library.

dreamingjuliet Of course you can join :) I don't have anything against BL don't worry. You're already third in my list though so you'll have to wait a bit for my feedback.

WinterBud It seems you also have to reply to their post and tell them you also want to swap :) And yes, I just realized most are waiting for the OP to reply or read their work first. You're one of the few who read my work immediately even before I replied to your comment.

My current reading list:

1. The Best Title by Alfwulf
2. Duality by JohnnyKbca
3. Love System: Changing Desitinies by dreamingjuliet

*If I missed anyone or I forgot a promised swap please let me know.

JA_Anton thanks, ya.

JohnnyKbca You're welcome. And no problem. You can take your time

Updated reading/swap list:

1. Love System: Changing Desitinies by dreamingjuliet
2. Nine-Tailed Fox by 0alex_reed0

Rise of Zion-https://www.webnovel.com/book/12389302305374305/Rise-of-Zion
please take a look and see if it is interesting.