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Hello dear writers, we decide to move the book comments into this post, otherwise the previous post will be too long.
Hello dear writers, we decide to move the book comments into this post, otherwise the previous post will be too long.
Find your work by the creation date
Listen to the System(Sounds like a ML novel, may need to show some female elements in the book cover and synopsis~)
The Mysterious Model(a bit boring, but very clear!)
U and Me(too little information)
His Imprint(too little information)
Hunting for a Husband in a Vampire Apocalypse(WELL DONE!!!)
Seekers of Knowledge(sounds not funny and confusing)
When CEO Brown Wants Romance(Love it!)
Ephemeral: A Short Story(so serious... sounds like the book my professor wants me to read)
Breaking Time(a bit boring)
Falling for Frost(hmmm, could be more interesting )
The Legend of Ashley(too little information)
Ashley's Legend(I believe these two are both your works)
Gunmetal Empress(I Love it!!)
love with an edge(hmm... too middle age)
Fireheart(sounds like the name of a movie,but no)
Children of Elisium(sounds like you want to win a prize about "literature")
Warrior Blood(not bad, but not useful enough if you are aiming at female readers )
Dying the Peach Blossoms Red(Is this a Eastern Fantasy novel?)
Miss Blue eyes(Not bad)
Until It Reaches Zero(It's okay, but i think it could be better)
The L’s( i think you want to make it sounds mysterious, but it's not interesting enough)
It's Revenge Time(nice key word~ but it's a bit boring)
Serendipity Happens(it's okay )
An Adventure with a Devil(Like this!)
ANOTHER CHANCE AT LOVE: ANOTHER WORLD I'M IN(Good~but please don't capitalize too much)
Queen of the Underworld(Well done!)
Unconditional Love: Young Brother-in-law Is Now My Husband(Good!! but it may be better if you delete "Unconditional Love”)
tears have left my eyes(very romantic, sounds like a poem, but it's a bit boring... )
The World Works In Mysterious Ways(not bad, please be more specific)
The World Works In Mysterious Ways(not bad but a bit interesting, please be more specific)
Missing You, Darling(ok, but just ok)
Wendy(Jane Eyre?Anna Karenina?Don't use these normal name if you are not famous as Charlotte Bronte and Lev Tolstoy please)
The Madness Within by LexieM3(what's this? )
Shaka Zulu The African Warrior(not bad actually)
First Love System(I LOVE IT!)
Our Perfectly Imperfect Relationship(PRETTY GOOD!)
Teen Dream(Is that you? Katy Perry?)
HOW DID I GET MARRIED?(very interesting~ but again, don't capitalize please)
When I Was Hired In A Secret Medical Unit(well done!)
Rebirth: Trash to Treasure(wow~ love it~)
The Superstar's Mischievous Lover(I want to give you a prize! :D)
The destiny(no)
Memories Blossoming in the Jianghu(pretty good if your readers know what Jianghu is)
The Universe Conspired For Us To Meet(cute~)
Together With Him(boring)
The Revenge(next)
A Half-Human Surviving In the Future(sounds ok~)
Its a story about a girl name Lisa who dies before she meets her childhood best friend who left to London for his studies her childhood friend name is Manny their friendship turned into love(next)
Serendipity: A Meeting Written In The Stars(ok)
I can't believe my dream came true(neither do I, next)
Chantless(honey, it's very hard to attract readers with this name)
Virtually and Genuinely in Love with You(ok)
Being Cinderella's Evil Stepsister(LOVE IT & LOVE IT!)
Worlds apart(boring)
Sad to be a murderer(nice key word, but why it sounds a bit boring?)
With You(no)
World under the Anti-Law(interesting key word)
Seducing Ms tsundere(thumbs up)
Taste of Fangs(what is Fangs?)
Anak Yang Putus Asa(???)
Unexpected Force Marriage(ok)
Destined Gatekeeper: First Female Blood(not bad)
Beast Queen(ok, Queen again)
Don't Go Breaking My Heart(sorry, but i have to )
Miss Nuggets and Lemonade(ok)
the clash of love(boring)
Beijing Majestic Couple(hahaha, really interesting)
Empress in Modern World(ok~ )
Empowerment(seriously?)
Lethal Fragrance(100√√√ )
A Wild Love Of The Devil and Fairy(hahaha! add it into my library!)
Gray Hour(50 shade of...?)
YOUNG LOVE(no)
Serenity(more specific please)
Offer to the CEO(good! )
Boyfriend Vs. Fiance(wooow~ Love triangle?? Count me in!)
Virtuous Ming Xiaoru(so 1990's...)
love lies to us all(sounds like the name of a song, may need more attration in the book cover and synopsis)
Staying Alive as a Side Character!(Wow! love it!)
From Fake To Forever(not bad~)
I'm Confused(Me too)
when I met him(Like a book written by a pupil)
Daughter of Smoke & Bone(cool)
When I'm Tired of Living in the Real World, I've Finally Decided to Migrate in Another World(soooo long! How about "Migrate in Another World")
KETIKA PANGERAN ICE YANG SEMPURNA MENIKAHI SEORANG PUTRI IBLIS YANG KEJI(goodbye?)
Re: First Ever AI Girlfriend!(interesting~)
Unbreakable Bond(sounds like a ML novel,add more female elements in the book cover)
Maple Keen(add more female elements in the book cover)
fb(???)
Diary of a teenage girl: My life in recent years ..(boring)
A Reincarnated Lady's Life in Another World(like this!)
Beijing Majestic Couple: Fulfilling of Feelings(hello again~ use the short one)
Supernatural Academy (Original)(pretty cool~ delete original may be better)
cinta sejati?(more detail please)
Operation:Break the Casanova Heart(ML novel?)
BEAKING NEWS: THE EMPRESS HAS SCALED THE FENCE AGAIN(what fence?)
First and last great love(pupil novel)
Demons For Christmas(Fairytale?)
Chin Up Princess!(not bad~ )
When love beckons twice(ok)
Ondhokar akash(no,lower the barrier!)
Del Me(haha! really? it's a good name actually)
Can I Be Your Support?(ok)
My life with her(next)
System of the primordial gods(simple, clear and interesting!)
Pick Up a CEO as Husband(simple, clear and interesting! well done!)
The Destiny(Have we met before?)
Re:Altered Fate(ok~ but you could try to make it funnier)
The Love I Craved For(ok,but this is not interesting enough)
The girl I love(ok, but this is not interesting enough)
The Forbidden fruit(cool~)
aliconio em naruto(???)
Immortal Souls : Cursed soulmates(Love it!)
My King of Spirits(ok, but, more interesting?)
Surviving in the Game(interesting~ but remember to add more female elements in the book cover and synopsis)
为什么德里克希尔在这里跟着我(hhhh honey~ don't use the Chinese to attract me. This title is interesting enough in English)
Are you real?(not bad~)
broken wings(cool~ )
An Amazing Dream(more specific?)
I love jesus(ok...)
Blood Minus(fine...)
When did I get married?!(Love it!!)
MALAM MISTIS DI ARCOPODO(???)
Garbage.(no)
Fell in love with a Killer(not bad)
I'm A Celebrity And a princess(good! very clear!)
CURSED OR GIFTED : A Little of Everything...(not bad)
full mark hidden marriage(Jiong Jiong You Yao is watching you)
Prince(boring)
Opening Up for you(ok)
The Legendary Warrior is the Princess(awesome!)
Blindfolded Wife X Masked Husband(cooooool~)
mr(who?)
Beautiful Melody from The Songstress(boring)
DNA core(am i reading economist?)
A GOLDEN HAIR(too little information)
The Number. Book One.(no)
UNHEARD VOICE(too little information and not attractive)
justices(Add an adjective?)
Find your work by the creation date
Wrenched Heart Ruptured Heaven(romance?)
The Blue Bride(Black widow? not bad)
The Rise Against The Evil King(very clear!)
The Hitman's Codex(Perfect!)
Arvis the Sole Human On Earth(hmmm... ok)
Zero Ranker(not bad~)
The War God has fallen in love.(I love it!!!)
Throne of the Eternal(ok )
The God of Light and Darkness(good~)
accidentally in love ( first meet I'm in love with her )(not bad actually~ ML romance is rare)
Defying the heavens(Good!! very Ergen! )
The Merchant's Apprentice(I like this! sounds like the name of a game)
What Makes You Beautiful(FL novel?)
The Antagonists(cool~)
Lilim Heritage Online(nice key words)
The Legendary Map-Maker(awesome!)
The Musical Romance(not unique enough)
the _______(the dash)( ? )
The Pioneer: Age of Immortality(how about "Age of Immortality", it's clear enough)
Lonely Entertainment(sounds sad... more detail? )
Sword Overlord(Well done!)
Elemental Heart(pretty cool~)
Sujeet Kumar jha(Don't use this kind of name if you are not famous enough)
When the Emperors Return(Cool!)
Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith(well done!)
I Missing You, Darling(I can just know that this is a romance)
Doomsday Incorporated(Unique and clear! love it!)
Battle Through Anime Worlds(awesome! )
NICO (The Psychopath)(okay...)
Into The Void(pretty cool! I am intrigued)
The incoming adventure of Lizzy and mizzy(story for children?)
D466ER(no... lower the barrier please)
Marvel: John The Versatile(Nice key word! )
Heavens luck?! thats fake!(haha, pretty interesting)
The Urban Cultivator(clear and interesting! Cultivation is a hot word!)
Through Thick and Thin(romance?)
Illusory Empire; True Hegemony(so historical...)
Di lemma(no)
Once upon a time(cliche)
Path Of Godhood(good!)
Project AAMYL(could you change "AAMYL" into other clear key words?)
Time Elemental Mage(awesome!)
Ember Blue(very deep...)
Hero King(simple and clear~)
Major in Frontlines(cool~)
Terror-In-Romance(not bad~)
Clan Otsutsuki In The Martial World(interesting~)
Trapped To The Unknown(not bad)
Mentally Challenged System(awesome!)
The Tower to the Godhood(Have we met before?)
Rising Sea Of Chaos(not bad actually, but it's a bit too serious)
Genius Master Sect(well done!)
Martial World Immortal realm(LOVE IT!)
Being Cipher(Very IT. Programmer, are you?)
Cultivator in an MMORPG(Awesome!)
Rebirth: Desperate Life of Wild Chicken(hahahaha! Fallen in love already! My favorite for now!)
Rey de las Calles(hmm, you know what, people will tend to something they are familier with)
A Phantom's Purpose(interesting)
A path to rule cosmos(good!!)
i stand by you(romance?)
Soul land 4(where is 1,2 and 3?)
Domination story(nice key word, but it could be better if it sounds more interesting)
JEON JIMIN(Jane Eyre?Anna Karenina?Don't use these normal name if you are not famous as Charlotte Bronte and Lev Tolstoy please)
A DESIRE FOR SIMPLE LIFE(not bad, but please don't use capitals.)
Immortal Martial world realm(cool~)
Language Of Sinners(pretty cool~)
The Messenger of Los(cool~)
Da demon king(wow~ demon king~ but what's Da?)
home and bored so I wrote bored 5000 times(fine... as long as you are happy... )
Naruto: A New Dawn(good~)
World of Chaos(not bad)
I, the evolved(well done!)
Path of God!(good)
the unexpected surprise(Are you pregant??? Congratulations!!)
Naruto is Reincarnated(clear and simple~ good~)
Mythic Nine: Weapons(ok~)
Ice Master(not bad~ But my brain is automatically play the BGM: "Let it go~")
Rebirth of the Legendary Swordsman(WELL DONE!)
The Forbidden One(ok~)
My Courageous Butterfly(too FL lead... although I am trying not influenced by the stereotype, it's hard)
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Lemon SQZ€¥"(anything wrong...?)
A Rising Author Challenging the Gods(woooow!! haha! Love it!)
How we Became lovers(not bad)
THE LEGENDS ARE BORN..(ok~)
Eye of the Gods(typical ML novel, good~)
Immortal fell from Sky on Earth(Intersting)
Timotheé Chalamet x Armie Hammer(Jane Eyre?Anna Karenina?Don't use these normal name if you are not famous as Charlotte Bronte and Lev Tolstoy please)
Artifact Planting Space(pretty good~ very clear)
One Way love(okay~)
Ludi Vitae -Game of Life-(nice key word!)
life of the undying sword(good!)
Heroic Saga(cool~)
Fate Reaper System(Love this!!)
Jack Of All Trade System!(wow~~)
Daybreak's Grimoire(cool~)
Heaven's Purge(not bad)
Villian: the real hero(a little bit boring actually)
Black Gate(not bad)
Saiyan David(Saiyan is very nice key word)
Shield of the Realm(cool!)
Chaotic Party On A Journey To Nowhere(not bad)
Infinite Weaponry(pretty good!)
Tomorrow always comes(so?)
Wolf Pack Creed(Nice!)
DXD true Emporer(ok)
World Purgatory(interesting~)
Equipment Master(okay~)
How to Make an Empire(simple, clear, interesting!)
Tales of War(ok)
i only want a badge(pretty interesting)
Into The Illius(not bad)
Encounter with Fate(not bad)
The_Transcend(could be better)
Breaking the fourth walls
Breaking the fourth walls (Fanfic)(ok)
Lawless Twins(cool!)
Love impossible(good! Dramatic and unique!)
Forbidden Magic Archives(good~)
The Gag Fantasy World(not bad~ pretty interesting)
The Fogged Glass Maze(pretty interesting)
The Universe is Innately Just(not bad)
Immortal reincarnates to goof-around(well done!)
Rise Of The Heavenly Fox(awesome!)
The Weapon Master's Transmigration(clear and interesting!)
The Journey Of The Unstopable Warlock(How about "The Journey Of Warlock" or "The Journey Of Warlock Master"?)
Super hero(too normal, try to be unique)
Ang Pipit at ang Maya(Lower the barrier of understanding please)
Morphia: Age of Magic(a bit boring, not unique and interesting enough)
book of beginnings(not attractive at all... )
Heaven's Fate(ok)
Journey to the HEH!(what's HEH?)
The Overlord Beastmasters(cool~)
Descend from Godhood to earth : Return of God king.(interesting~ but could you make it shorter? God king descends to earth? )
Reborn as Kenichi in the world of History's Strongest Disciple(interesting,but, too long......)
Kamu: The Last Words(ok, but it's not attractive)
Eye of The Eclipse(cool~)
BTS Fell inlove with one girl(actually, not bad~)
The book of Solomon(nice key word)
Till Me(romance?)
Your Reason Is My Life(good name if this is a romance)
trail husband(good~)
Tale of the Strongest Evolver(good~ but you could try "The Strongest Evolver" , this may be better~)
My sweet bodyguard(not bad~)
The Greatest Casanova (cool!)
That kiss (wow~)
Devil's Dungeon (well done!)
Are you really my mom ? (hahaha, like this!)
Pokémon world with system(awesome! wonderful key words)
the life where i belong(zzz)
The Light of Hope(zzz)
A Long Way(zzz)
DrakWorldS Tale(Drak world's?)
harry potter!!!(JK Rowling is watching you)
Mysterious King (ok, a bit boring)
An Unstopable Will (funnier,could you?)
Lawyer in an Apocalyptic World (cool~)
The Light Novel Lover (not attractive)
Do we have to post first something or what in order to get on the list?
Good luck, everyone! Fighting!
TravelingPoet no need to~ as long as you create the work and choose the writing contest tag, you will on our list. we will give comments everyday until the whole contest end
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL can you add the username of the author so we can take a look at their stories, too? cause when i search for some, nothing shows up.
Reinesse same, I was also looking for some stories...but I couldn't find them. maybe the author's could provide links or links with the story names.
nice <3
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL The story of wrenched heart ruptured heaven is of how a guy who becomes the strongest guy of the world falls in love and marries his lover. But his wife had been killed, in anguish and anger he ruptures the heaven while declaring that he will have his revenge. Though that comes in the middle of the story. The begenning is how he becomes the strongest man and how his wife is killed.
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL To add more directly female elements into the title as requested, I've changed the title of the webnovel from "Warrior Blood" to "Goddess of War".
Hope that improves it but do let me know if it makes it worse instead.
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL I changed my title to simple Destined Gatekeeper from Destined Gatekeeper: First Female Blood. This fits the story better but I make sure the cover specified a woman protagonist. What do you think?
Changes made, project AAMYL is now project AMY.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12526725706758005
Is it better to write in FIRST PERSON or THIRD PERSON??
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Changed the name from Chantless to Chantless Enchantress. Hope that’s better....
@WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL i don't find my title here?? is it in your list? if not, should i re-upload??
does anyone has the same problem?
How do we see the comments?
Is it on the novel, I cannot publish mine, because of an email issue I tryed to make a new one but it would not work
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Woahhhh amazing! I didn’t publish that Empress in Modern World only in draft but it was (ok~) pfft and the one I published was (so 1990s) lol so funny! Thanks I’m so happy hahahahaha
So it was okay not to published as long as you joined the contest.. cool!
YANZUE Always Third person!!! (very serious)
SAM_Z Better! But You can do better. Actually your synopsis is pretty interesting, but i suggest you to explain AMY and make the title more clear. (such as Project Reborn/ Transmigration/ blahblah) This title is not bad, but it's still too "what's that?" . Remember, lower the barrier of entry!