Hi, I've posted the first 3 chapters and also change the synopsis a bit. So, could you also please do a review over my work and tell me what part should be change so I could make it better?
Btw, could we delete the outline story and characters in the auxiliary volume now or we could only do it when the contest end? @WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL thanks a lot before :)
Here is the link to my work:
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Hiya, someone is posting my translation of The Reader and Protagonist Definitely Have to Be in True Love without permission. Can you please remove it ASAP? https://www.webnovel.com/book/12588316205015005/The-Reader-and-Protagonist-Definitely-Have-to-Be-in-True-Love
I am sure that I posted it. S
I am pretty sure that I did add the my little planet tag to it.
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL
When will the contest end?
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Operation:Break the Casanova's Heart seems to be unoriginal. Sort of sure it's plagiarized. A book of the same title is in wattpad and was even published as a physical book few years ago.
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL thanks :)
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL I changed the title and the cover page, the title is "The Savior of a world of magic cannot use any magic???!!!"
Hello! I just joined this contest and posted my book. And I would like you to have a look at it, please. This is for the Male Lead entry. Thank you ! :)
Title: Vice-Versa
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12618622806175005/Vice-Versa
Synopsis:
Two worlds.
Earth, the third planet in the solar system, Milky Way Galaxy, is home to humans and instinctual animals.
Sekai, a world full of magic and mythical creatures along with developments in science and technology that far surpasses that of Earth.
Two boys.
One is an ordinary Japanese.
The other is the Third Prince of the prosperous Saishi Kingdom.
One name.
Tachibana Yuri is an ordinary student who lives a peaceful life on Earth.
On the other hand, Yuri Tachibana is the third prince of the Saishi Kingdom. With the day to day threat of grotesque creatures called "Youma" and political warfare between countries raging on, this prince is used to wars.
However, how will both boys fare when they suddenly find themselves in each other's worlds? Will the Prince be able to masquerade as "Tachibana Yuri"? Can Tachibana survive the fantastical hell that is the Saishi Kingdom?
Dazed and with a throbbing heart, Raphael Simon wakes up to find himself given a second chance.
His mistakes, his regrets, the things he never achieved or even thought about trying - all of these are now open to him once again, as he wakes up eleven years younger, at the very beginning of Origo, the VRMMORPG which he immersed himself in for a third of his previous life.
In the depths of a forest filled with vines and undergrowth, near a captivating waterfall is where his story begins anew - the story of Jiver Lefevre.
A Human, a Blacksmith, and a Rogue that threw away his daggers for two sturdy hammers.
First three chapters have been posted. As I have mentioned in the Auxiliary Chapter, I guarantee that there will be no broken items and/or skills, so if you want to read and support a novel that will not have plot armor, now's your chance.
Bonus information: Any Spirit Stone coupons won from this event will be raffled away to readers of the novel, after the competition is over! You are eligible to win it if you have EVER voted for the novel with a Power Stone. (Prizes are received 7 days after its completion).
Happy new year!! My novel got a green light for the contest!
I finally finished the first three chapters of Virtually and Genuinely in Love with You
For those who're curious, here's the synopsis:
Verlene is a lurker in an online community for artists. She loves to stalk popular artists for inspiration and drowns herself in a loop of depressing songs when desperate for melancholy sparks. Occasionally, she browses NKD for new songs and live streams.
A small preview of black screen with bolded words in white read: FIRST STREAM caught her attention. The amount of viewers did not even reach 30 when she entered the room.
A certain streamer: "Thank you all for coming! I'm actually quite nervous about this…"
Verlene (ID: Kiku): This voice is so misleading… Let's ask in the comment box! "Uh… boy or girl?!"
A certain streamer: "How rude, Kiku-san! I am a MAN!"
Verlene (ID: Kiku): …Yeah, right. As if.
Many years later:
Hibiki: Am I not manly enough for you?
Verlene: Well… Whenever you sing in high-pitched voice, it can't be helped…
Hibiki: … Fine! Let's take this to the bed!
Verlene: ….!!!!
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Please be kind since this is my first time writing webnovel. Support and comments are warmly welcome!
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL thank you for the feedback!
Title suggestion after feedback:
29 Dec // Beautiful Melody from The Songstress -----> One Melody At A Time
How? X'D
New chapter released!!
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https://m.webnovel.com/book/12526725706758005/33860561800316147
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Hi, I'm the author of Throne of the Eternal. I change the name and the synopsis, is it better?
Path of the Tyrant King
Synopsis:
Long ago a boy was born to a powerful clan, he was on track to inherit his grandfather's mantle, but alas he fell in love with the wrong person.
What happened next was only karma, he was beaten and flogged to death by his kinsmen and with a single breath left he cursed them. He would return one day and leave no traces of this wretched clan. He then used a forbidden method to condense his essence into one.
This boy would become the highest demon under heaven, leaving a reign of terror that spanned eons. His evil heritage left an indelible mark upon history. But alas righteousness prevailed once again and the great demon was slain, eras passed and his mark all but disappeared.
A Blood Moon hangs as a forgotten corpse rises, the great demon returns once again!
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL I'm sorry for doing this, but this hit me up bit late, so there it is. I changed the name and synopsis again, and for one final time. This time the name is Dogs of War. It was The Messenger of Los, then it was the Savior of a magical world cannot use any magic, it was kind of bland, so I reworked on my story, deleted 2 chapters and renamed it for the last time. So my entry is : Dogs of War. Thank you for your Patience.
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Can I enter a new story?
Hi guys, I hope that you spare me just a little bit of your time in reading my entry. Thanks! 
Hello Everyone!
Good luck and inspiration for all of you! Thank you for your attention to my work
The Numbers That Brought Our Fates Together
Flames devoured the remnants of a fallen plane. The pilot's voice was no longer audible. Slowly falling white snow reinforced the feeling of complete hopelessness.
"Lena, run!"
"But…"
"I said, RUN!"
Taking his words as an order, Elena's legs, not listening to the desires of her heart, carried her away from this place as quickly as possible.
Out of breath, but finding the strength to run farther through this dark forest, she heard nothing but the knock in her chest.
Suddenly, the ground disappeared under her feet, and the body lost its balance.
"Oh, and who is this hiding in here? Did the little mouse decide to play with the big cat? Oh dear, as I said, you can not hide from me. Neither in this life nor the next one."
Elena's heart sank in horror. She has just lost the last chance to survive.
@WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Hello! I hope you notice my title :) I entered the contest just last night.
Author: Minyol
Title: Mr. System, I Love You
Genre: Magical Realism, Fantasy, Cultivation, Romance
Novel link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12630791806246305
Synopsis:
In the brink of death, Eva, a 16-year old orphan peasant in the Kingdom of S'alazar, was resigned to dying due to the cold in her mostly empty shack in the slums outside the border of the City of Maine, that is, until she heard a voice in her head that would change the course of her life, or the world for that matter.
Used to the grit needed to overcome the harshness of this world, but now equipped with a System (with a handsomely alluring voice) who filled the gaps of her human weaknesses, Eva easily grows in power and strength. Interestingly, she soon discovers that, not only does she now find in herself the desire to conquer the world with the ability to do so, but she is now also dead-set in conquering her System's heart.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12389302305374305/33898819758390905/Rise-of-Zion
Can you take a look at this novel, With 24 chapters, I'm looking for some honest opinions.
You can leave your detailed opinion in the forum.
https://forum.webnovel.com/d/17409-rise-of-zion-an-apocalyptic-novel
The novel is not part of the contest, but do me a favor please.
