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Or maybe you could just change it a little? McDonalds to MacDonalds
Pepsi to Pepsie
Something like that~

Nightmare_Taichou

Oh my, you're so detailed. But, I love it! You could be a great editor!
Don't worry, I'm very happy instead that you took your time to correct my mistakes and make it better. Many thanks! I'll fix it asap :D

Honestly, I don't have anything bad I could say about your work. The novel is interesting. It's written with such great details and each characters also well-introduced.

I just found something that I thought would be better if you could change it (from chapter 7) :

He shrugged. "So, if you want to "invent" volleyball here, I won't stop you. If you want to "invent" manga, I'm not going to stop you."

Maybe you could just use 'invent' instead of "invent"?
And, I think you're using too many " in your novel when you actually could just use '

Who was the brunet? He had already met Mamoru and Kohaku but he's never seen the brunet-haired girl before.

The correct word for it is brunette not brunet.

The one directly in front of him had balls of Fire swirling around his clenched fists while the other stood with a gigantic scythe that had Fire raging around its blade.

Is there a good reason for you to use the capital F for fire?

Sure, Akira was nice and funny and the whatnot, but he can be pretty terrible and disgusting as he's experienced. But Seiya is actually rather gentle, and he doesn't bark at him like Akira had when they'd first met.

I think it would be better if you change but to whereas
Actually I found the whatnot kind of weird too, but I also couldn't find a better word to use.

That's about it from me. I hope what I just said doesn't make you offended :)

Nightmare_Taichou Haha yes, it's in very slow update because I currently focused on the first one that is in contest. I'll give yours a review too asap. Once again, thanks~ :)

Thank you so so much in advance :)

My 2nd novel

Author: RanAml
Title: My Sunday Delight
Genre: Modern Romance
Synopsis:

Sunday.

Our protagonist, Estrella Davis hates that day the most.

What's wrong with Sunday, you asked?

Because, it was the day she discovered her best friend since high school has been sleeping with her (now ex) boyfriend. And worst of all, she discovered the adulterer couple on her supposedly 3rd year anniversary!

She was so stupid right? To be played by the two person closest to her for God knows how long!

And what's with this CEO?

Who said he's a warm and refined gentleman?

Poor you all, to have been fooled by him. He's clearly a wolf in a sheep's clothing!

"Pretty boy, I can finance myself. So, only spoil me with your loyalty because I would never share my man!"

"Sweetheart~ My loyalty, my love, everything I own and every inch of my body is for you only. Please, never doubt that."

"I don't need your body!"

"You will soon, sweetheart. You said I'm your man, so you have to take responsibility. You have to marry me."

"........!!!"

Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12092356605911605

Hi, can I ask a review for 2 novels of mine? Thank you in advance :)

My 1st novel

Author: RanAml
Title: Serendipity Happens
Genre: Modern Romance
Synopsis:

A letter came to her out of the blue:

1st day: 'Hello, Miss. Do you have a name? Or can I call you mine?'

2nd day: 'Excuse me, I seem to have lost my phone number. Can I have yours?'

3rd day: 'Beautiful, do you have any raisins? No? Then, how about a date?'

Who would believe, the famous cold-as-ice President of internet giant Agnolo Holdings is a master at cheesy pick-up lines?!

. . .

Her name is Callaluna. Her parents left her in front of the orphanage when she was just a baby with a promise to take her back. But, they never came.

Until one day, the orphanage she lived in burned to ashes with no one survived. Except for her.

With nowhere to go, she wandered the street by herself trying to find a place she could call home once more. But, again, fate messed her life. She suddenly died in a car accident.

But, is it the end?

No.

For her, it's only the beginning.

And she would have never imagine she would, unexpectedly, find a love so wonderful.

Yes, serendipity really happens to her.

So, let it find you too.

Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12524568106748305

Hyowha I see. I guess I should make it more relatable then. Thank youu :)

Hyowha I see. I guess I should make it more relatable then. Thank youu :)

Hyowha I see. I guess I should make it more relatable then. Thank youu :)

SimmeringHours Aww..yeah I tend to have quite many mistakes in that area. Many thanks for your review and advice, MistWalker :D

Btw, I've done my review on your novel too. I like the story so far, and it's also getting really interesting in the end of chapter 3. You're really good at portraying characters expression and describing their little movements! :)

The story is about a girl who suddenly died but then got a second chance to live again and came back to her past a few years before. The 'letter' part is when she meet the ML in her second life.

Actually, I added that part to rouse potential readers' interest to read my novel.

Hyowha sorry, what do you mean with separate synopsis?

Hello, would you guys mind to help me with my synopsis too? Thanks before :)

My novel is "Serendipity Happens"

Synopsis:

A letter came to her out of the blue:

1st day: 'Hello, Miss. Do you have a name? Or can I call you mine?'

2nd day: 'Excuse me, I seem to have lost my phone number. Can I have yours?'

3rd day: 'Beautiful, do you have any raisins? No? Then, how about a date?'

Who would believe, the famous cold-as-ice President of internet giant Agnolo Holdings is a master at cheesy pick-up lines?!

. . .

Her name is Callaluna. Her parents left her in front of the orphanage when she was just a baby with a promise to take her back. But, they never come.

Until one day, the orphanage she lived in caught a fire and burned to ashes with no one survived. Except her.

With nowhere to go, she wandered the street by herself trying to find a place she could call home once more.
But, again, fate played her. She died because of a truck ran over her.

Is it the end?

No.

For her, it's only the beginning.

Hi, I've posted the first 3 chapters and also change the synopsis a bit. So, could you also please do a review over my work and tell me what part should be change so I could make it better?
Btw, could we delete the outline story and characters in the auxiliary volume now or we could only do it when the contest end? @WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL thanks a lot before :)

Here is the link to my work:

Serendipity Happens

Yeonsoo09 Urwc. Hope it helps :)

BravelyNovice Try to search in webnovel's forum, there are some people that offered to make cover for free. As for me, and some people here, we made a cover by ourselves.