yoursexypotato Yup. I'm seeing a pattern where readers have an opinion about a very fuzzy world, and what my characters look like definitely belongs there. I'll splice in minor expositions here and there to flesh out the setting (including facial expressions).

Thanks for pointing it out.

    Jamison_C Sure! Can you leave a link for yours?

    I think I'd like someone to point out the flaws in my novel.

    Would you mind? :D

        yoursexypotato

        No problem, I would probably take as long.

        I could do a more comprehensive review than usual. Would you like to connect on discord for that version?

        Lastly, any tolerance level? I do nuclear and dispassionate machine.

            yoursexypotato Gah! Link and I'll immediately add it to the queue. My apologies.

            Edit: Found it. In queue.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/12834608106610305/Runeless

                Newer Story

                8 chapters proligue
                2 chapters MC

                So far.

                Because of one flaw Kals world is turned upside down. Those he called feiends shun and beat him The family he knew all his short life are planning to sell him and the worst part is the kingdom he lives in wished he was never born. Runeless and fighting for survival in a kingdom that only sees him for profit or servitude.

                Was it always like this? Can I survive it?

                review swap? x3

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