yoursexypotato Yup. I'm seeing a pattern where readers have an opinion about a very fuzzy world, and what my characters look like definitely belongs there. I'll splice in minor expositions here and there to flesh out the setting (including facial expressions).

Thanks for pointing it out.

Jamison_C Sure! Can you leave a link for yours?

I think I'd like someone to point out the flaws in my novel.

Would you mind? :D

    yoursexypotato

    No problem, I would probably take as long.

    I could do a more comprehensive review than usual. Would you like to connect on discord for that version?

    Lastly, any tolerance level? I do nuclear and dispassionate machine.

      yoursexypotato Gah! Link and I'll immediately add it to the queue. My apologies.

      Edit: Found it. In queue.

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/12834608106610305/Runeless

        Newer Story

        8 chapters proligue
        2 chapters MC

        So far.

        Because of one flaw Kals world is turned upside down. Those he called feiends shun and beat him The family he knew all his short life are planning to sell him and the worst part is the kingdom he lives in wished he was never born. Runeless and fighting for survival in a kingdom that only sees him for profit or servitude.

        Was it always like this? Can I survive it?

        review swap? x3

          a month later

          ChessityFlames
          Hello my friend!

          You can give this a try as it's not a pure romance novel. :)
          It's a fictional story and is ongoing.
          It's an all in one novel dealing with mythical creatures. With right amount of mystery, suspense, adventure and romance.
          Please do give it a read and maybe a review will help me a lot! This is my first novel and I expect honest reviews from you all! :)

          NOVEL : The Bewitched Soul
          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13168629905940905

          SYNOPSIS:
          A 5 year old Margaret lived with her widowed mother in a small village of Brookville. For the little girl everything seemed perfect until one day her world drowned in an ocean of blood.
          As the only survivor of the massacre, will Margaret be able to survive? Will she be able to unfold the mystery behind the death of her mother?

          Thank you :)

            13 days later
            5 months later

            It’s me again~

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            Title: Somehow (One Thing Led To Another)
            Genre: Romance
            Keywords: modern, school, comedy, romance, reincarnation
            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14372926105133505

            SYNOPSIS:

            "If you look at me, then you're mine."

            A simple superstition that consisted of 8 words were the words she wished she could take back.

            ———

            Yang Jihyung was what anyone could ever dream of:

            Rich? Check.
            Smart? If you don’t include foreign languages and sports, the
            n check.
            Attractive? Check.
            Kind? Che- let’s move on to the next part.

            Song Areum, the Young Miss of the Song Family who had her life set in stone, knew better than to admire him.

            With her impending marriage and the pavement laid down before her, why did this reincarnator have to appear just now?

              Title: The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect

              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12018411706763805/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Bennu-Effect

              Genre: Magical Realism/ Urban Fantasy

              Tags: Female Leads, Alternative Universes, Time Travel

              Synopsis:

              "Time will always fix itself...no matter how much you try..."
              If you find yourself one day responsible to save everyone you love against the mightiest power of nature; Time. Bennu Effect tells the story of Malika; a young doctor that one day finds herself responsible to save the lives of the closest people to her and learn the truth of her life and how that will change her forever.

              Title: The Wine House

              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14534029405677605/The-Wine-House

              Genre: Romance/ Comedy/ Urban Fantasy

              Tags: Female Leads, Alternative Universes, College Romance

              Synopsis:

              Wine House follows the story of two best friends find themselves in a magical situation where true love is right in front of them and it's their choice to take the risk to fall in love or simply regret it for the rest of their lives.

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