yoursexypotato Yup. I'm seeing a pattern where readers have an opinion about a very fuzzy world, and what my characters look like definitely belongs there. I'll splice in minor expositions here and there to flesh out the setting (including facial expressions).

Thanks for pointing it out.

    Jamison_C Sure! Can you leave a link for yours?

    I think I'd like someone to point out the flaws in my novel.

    Would you mind? :D

        yoursexypotato

        No problem, I would probably take as long.

        I could do a more comprehensive review than usual. Would you like to connect on discord for that version?

        Lastly, any tolerance level? I do nuclear and dispassionate machine.

            yoursexypotato Gah! Link and I'll immediately add it to the queue. My apologies.

            Edit: Found it. In queue.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/12834608106610305/Runeless

                Newer Story

                8 chapters proligue
                2 chapters MC

                So far.

                Because of one flaw Kals world is turned upside down. Those he called feiends shun and beat him The family he knew all his short life are planning to sell him and the worst part is the kingdom he lives in wished he was never born. Runeless and fighting for survival in a kingdom that only sees him for profit or servitude.

                Was it always like this? Can I survive it?

                review swap? x3

                  a month later

                  ChessityFlames
                  Hello my friend!

                  You can give this a try as it's not a pure romance novel. :)
                  It's a fictional story and is ongoing.
                  It's an all in one novel dealing with mythical creatures. With right amount of mystery, suspense, adventure and romance.
                  Please do give it a read and maybe a review will help me a lot! This is my first novel and I expect honest reviews from you all! :)

                  NOVEL : The Bewitched Soul
                  Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13168629905940905

                  SYNOPSIS:
                  A 5 year old Margaret lived with her widowed mother in a small village of Brookville. For the little girl everything seemed perfect until one day her world drowned in an ocean of blood.
                  As the only survivor of the massacre, will Margaret be able to survive? Will she be able to unfold the mystery behind the death of her mother?

                  Thank you :)

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