yoursexypotato Yup. I'm seeing a pattern where readers have an opinion about a very fuzzy world, and what my characters look like definitely belongs there. I'll splice in minor expositions here and there to flesh out the setting (including facial expressions).

Thanks for pointing it out.

Jamison_C Sure! Can you leave a link for yours?

I think I'd like someone to point out the flaws in my novel.

Would you mind? :D

    yoursexypotato

    No problem, I would probably take as long.

    I could do a more comprehensive review than usual. Would you like to connect on discord for that version?

    Lastly, any tolerance level? I do nuclear and dispassionate machine.

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