Luna1777 Read up until chapter 3 the pace is pretty good.I'm liking the beginning conflict between the queen and her lover. The transmigration scene to the ghost possessed tree was a bit of a shocker. English is my first language your writing was understandable and easy to read. That character list at the front of the story was pretty long not going to lie I skipped through that so I could meet the characters as I read it. Solid beginning of a story keep at it.

      My current projects are:
      The Divine Maintenance Man.
      Meet John he does all the dirty work that keeps the facilities of heaven and hell running smoothly. John is getting old and wants to retire so he decides to get a mortal to eventually replace him.
      Meet Joe the deadbeat inept building manager of an illegal apartment complex.
      He smokes weed everyday and does as little work as possible. Due to a chance encounter John makes up his mind that Joe is going to be his apprentice wven if he has to kill Joe to make it happen.

      A Slackers Guide to Immortality.
      Meet Joe a 20 something year old with no steady job no girlfriend and no clue. He gets abducted by cultivators because of a debt his father owed to their sect.
      Both stories are filled with cheap laughs and interesting imagery. Neither is a typical cultivation story.

        PoppyQueen Thanks, the link in description, I'll review it after I finished the story.

            SouthToiletWizard Both project are interesting. I like to read A Slackers Guide to Immortality in the future. Because I'm a 'cheap person'.
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            Why it sounds so wrong? XD

                Luna1777. Cheap is the only way to live. One of my favorite short stories I read was about a rich old guy that was dying. All of his family kept telling him that he couldn't take it with him.The only one not hounding him for money was his driver. The old guy gave him the key to his limo in exchange for taking care of his funeral. Long story short the guy gets cremated in a crappy pine box loaded with all of his bonds stock certificates deeds and his other assests turned into paper money. His relatives scramble to try to get the limo but his driver only laughs in their faces as he holds the bill of sale up. Classic Rolls worth 400k sold to the driver for 1 cent it read.

                    Luna1777 sadly there is no link. It was out of a literature textbook that I had in middle school English class. That book was published in 1987 I was reading it in 2001 I think.

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