Anyone who doesn't mind reading action-adventure with boys love moments, would appreciate if someone gave my gem a look. I'm hoping to check if this story isn't:

  • Hard to read. English is okay enough.
  • Can be followed like a standalone book
  • Not too saucy with the BL moments. Although, according to my content media training, it's nowhere near saucy enough to be rated mature. :eyes:

Story is The Fourth Zaldizko
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13449042306894305/The-Fourth-Zaldizko

You can skip the auxiliary chapters there unless you don't mind the extra support information.

Drop me your link for a review and let me know if there is anything specific you'd like me to look for.

    @INeedRest
    @1eyedwriter
    @Rothfuss
    @RenuKakkar

    @bochetab2
    @Nidalee
    I would like to do a review swap with you all. Am currently writing a quick transmigration novel.

    https://m.webnovel.com/book/13407968206765605

    Please do give my work a read.

    If you don't want to go through all the chapters, I would be much obliged if you read the chapters of the second arc from chapter 50 (nightmare) onwards and then write your review.

    Thanks in advance x

      Krizzeir Sure. Thank you. I'll read through your story. Give me a couple of days for the review, since I'll be reading it on a plane. Thanks heaps.

      _Rain , it will take me a while since I'm lining up books for a review swap..But I have already downloaded it to my library

      _Rain , it will take me a while since I'm lining up books for a review swap..But I have already downloaded it to my library

      Shiksha_Jerath
      Done reviewing your novel.
      There were little errors but that's fine because the main plot and the star attraction of your novel - the system was well written.
      Good Job.

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