May1st hey there thanks for your words. i appreciate them. Would like to ask some suggestions about character and world design. Im a new author. So don't have much experience. Can you help me a little in this regard??

    May1st
    Well don't worry about english. It is not the only thing that matters. Nowadays language mistakes can be corrected through apps and sites and it is not a big thingy. What matters most is the plot. Can it attract the readers and how the characters affect the readers. And you are doing a good job in it. And here's my email

    kritsufer007@gmail.com

    Looking forward to your suggestions.

        Anyone who doesn't mind reading action-adventure with boys love moments, would appreciate if someone gave my gem a look. I'm hoping to check if this story isn't:

        • Hard to read. English is okay enough.
        • Can be followed like a standalone book
        • Not too saucy with the BL moments. Although, according to my content media training, it's nowhere near saucy enough to be rated mature. :eyes:

        Story is The Fourth Zaldizko
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/13449042306894305/The-Fourth-Zaldizko

        You can skip the auxiliary chapters there unless you don't mind the extra support information.

        Drop me your link for a review and let me know if there is anything specific you'd like me to look for.

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          I would like to do a review swap with you all. Am currently writing a quick transmigration novel.

          https://m.webnovel.com/book/13407968206765605

          Please do give my work a read.

          If you don't want to go through all the chapters, I would be much obliged if you read the chapters of the second arc from chapter 50 (nightmare) onwards and then write your review.

          Thanks in advance x

            Krizzeir Sure. Thank you. I'll read through your story. Give me a couple of days for the review, since I'll be reading it on a plane. Thanks heaps.

              _Rain , it will take me a while since I'm lining up books for a review swap..But I have already downloaded it to my library

                _Rain , it will take me a while since I'm lining up books for a review swap..But I have already downloaded it to my library

                  Shiksha_Jerath
                  Done reviewing your novel.
                  There were little errors but that's fine because the main plot and the star attraction of your novel - the system was well written.
                  Good Job.

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