I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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Human in a Demon's Hide
Synopsis-
I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier.
Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself.
I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws!
I had only a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt.
I just need the money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect.
The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on the family name. We became such a joke in the country that our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but I don’t care. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable!
To protect the smiles of my only family, I would do anything.
Yet, life knows to shit on you when things are just getting good.
Hello, author-san here!
This is my first story, set up in a fantasy world. It's based on the medieval AND steam era where magic is rarity and alchemy is used widely used as a weapon by people.
There would be lots of action, adventure, betrayal, tragedy, romance, etc. ahead.
Warning- The mc is a bit mean and foul-mouthed, introvert.
There would be strong language and lots of monologue narration by the MC.
The stories are fast-paced and progressing faster.
Also, English isn't my first language, so don't expect perfect grammar :(
P.S. - I would like some constructive critique and feedback!
It fills my motivation gauge and increases that rate of chapter/week.
(/>3<)/ thanks for checking out
(Demon's Hide)
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