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WithJ
hi!
I am also looking for quality review swap.. If youre interested, here's mine.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12316009105249005

WithJ You do need an account, but it’s just email sign up. I was specifically looking for there though, but if you’re not comfortable with doing it though, it’s ok. (:

Hello! I would like a review swap also! I still have some reviews in queue, but I will get to yours as soon as I can! My novel is still in its beginning process. Each chapter is fairly short and an easy read.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13297266705352405

dusty_angel Thanks! Added yours to the queue :)

Chryiss I finished your review and posted it on your WN site. Thought I would take longer actually but your chapters were a pretty short read and I got sucked into the world :)

WithJ Oh lol, you found the Webnovel version of my story. Well I suppose I needed a more current review here haha! Thanks for the review, I’ll do yours tomorrow after some sleep. (:

Also you were scarily right on the money in your last sentences about MC’s possible conenction this world before. You’re literally the only whole one who pointed that out, so that makes me happy but also worried as a writer. XD I also noted a few days ago that I made MC too mysterious purposefully, so I was going to write more of her inner monologues in future chapters in order to grasp her character better. As you noticed among others, sometimes her calmness/embrace of the world might seem unrealistic. There’s a reason, but yeah, I gotta stop being arcane and just spill the beans lol. As for the prologue scene, that wasn’t exactly to show the mundane, being bored of the world aspect, but the esoteric words after the end of the scene were. The walking in the rain scene was an expanded form of a single paragraph rain internal monologue. I’ve still been debating the necessity of the prologue. :p

Chryiss Lol was I? I thought you were dropping a lot of hints with respect to that. When one of the character said lavender coloured magic wasn't common (or something along the lines), I was already suspicious and then the chapter about the Water and Light gods came haha...Well I'm glad I picked up on it. Sometimes I tend to overthink/overanalyze. Anyway I'm really enjoying your story so looking forward to the next update :)

WithJ Nah haha. I didn’t really want the review here, but I’m not going to force anyone to post somewhere else or back out on a confirmed review swap due to that. (:

Hehe, yes you’re good. Maybe as an over-analyzer myself, that’s why most people didn’t pick up on the many scattered allusions. Most of the time they’re just frustrated or confused about the unrelated ‘info dumps’ or blandness because of the mystery aspect which withholds other info/connections which strings it together. Ah, I made such a weird combination. I do need to balance it more in the rewrite. Anyway thanks again!

I’ll start reading on my commute.

WithJ Me too if you don't mind Romance/fantasy : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13436164505802305

WithJ Really took my time today reading and reviewing your story. I won’t say more as the longer than usual review and comments say it all.

Chryiss Thanks for the long, thoughtful review and for continuing to read despite the heavy content at the beginning, but well rainbows only comes after the storm lol :)

To everyone else on the queue, I haven't forgotten. Just taking my time going down the list in order.

lovehalsey Your review's been done.

MyCharacterLeads Done your review.

WithJ thank you

dusty_angel Hi, I've finished your review :) Great start and excellent narration!

Also looking for more review swaps if anyone else interested since I only have one story left in queue lol. Actually found some promising novels I would otherwise not know about through the review swaps,

Sapphirechelsea237 Yes I am, and added you to the queue!

WithJ Thanks! :)