WithJ Nah haha. I didn’t really want the review here, but I’m not going to force anyone to post somewhere else or back out on a confirmed review swap due to that. (:

Hehe, yes you’re good. Maybe as an over-analyzer myself, that’s why most people didn’t pick up on the many scattered allusions. Most of the time they’re just frustrated or confused about the unrelated ‘info dumps’ or blandness because of the mystery aspect which withholds other info/connections which strings it together. Ah, I made such a weird combination. I do need to balance it more in the rewrite. Anyway thanks again!

I’ll start reading on my commute. 😄

      WithJ Really took my time today reading and reviewing your story. I won’t say more as the longer than usual review and comments say it all.

          Chryiss Thanks for the long, thoughtful review and for continuing to read despite the heavy content at the beginning, but well rainbows only comes after the storm lol :)

          To everyone else on the queue, I haven't forgotten. Just taking my time going down the list in order.

            dusty_angel Hi, I've finished your review :) Great start and excellent narration!

            Also looking for more review swaps if anyone else interested since I only have one story left in queue lol. Actually found some promising novels I would otherwise not know about through the review swaps,

                WithJ
                Hi, are you still reviewing? If you are doing, then here's mine-

                Title- Love and Betrayal: Slaves of her Heart
                Synopsis-

                “One day you're going to remember me and how much I loved you… then you will hate yourself for letting me go.“ ...
                Is it a crime to fall in love?
                Rosella had never thought that she would be trapped in a web of politics, lies, deception, and misunderstandings.
                What she wanted was love but received only pain and betrayal.
                It is the story of a broken Empress, of her struggles inside a place full of ruthless schemes.

                "How could you give me to any other man, I waited for you so long ! Did you ever love me or not?" asked Rosella

                "You know darling! everything is fair in love and war!" Nicholas smirked.

                "I wish that we would have never met in this lifetime and I pray, that we will not meet each other in the next one" screamed Rosella...

                Even if I fall in love with someone new, it could never be the way I loved you...

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/Love-and-Betrayal%3A-Slaves-of-her-heart
                :)

                    WithJ I'm sorry, I know you said you only review books with around 5 to 10 chapters, but I still had to ask. My novel has a one shot of 3k words, which I'll make into a collection of one shots if the readers like it. But there aren't many, so I ask of you to please give it a try. I would link my other novel, but I feel like I've written the one shot better and my writing skills may have improved there. Once again, sorry if I annoyed you (:
                    Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/13478929905953305

                        NatsumeRikka Hey, don't be sorry for asking, neither am I annoyed. I only put the 5-10 chapters requirement with the thought of people will be posting full-length novels. And with full-length novels, I find it's only fair to give a proper review at least 10 or so chapters in since the chapters on WN are super short lol. (Although I had also said if you have enough content I will review it.) This is just to make sure I am able to give you guys quality reviews.

                        One-shots are different. I'll add your one-shot to the queue :)

                            Sapphirechelsea237 Yes please don't expect an immediate review. It takes me time to read and write a review. Also I go down the list in order. Currently I'm still reading your chapters. You can check first post to see my review status/which story I'm on.

                            blankkarma Ok I will add you to the queue.

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