XOMatsumaeohana Left you a review. There were some things that bothered me, but overall it's a good read and an enjoyable story.

If possible, I'd ask a review of my novel, Duality. The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters. Anyways, thanks a lot, and I hope you continue your novels and growing as a writer.

      Rxel

      Me too!
      Title- Your Betraying Love
      Synopsis-

      “One day you're going to remember me and how much I loved you… then you will hate yourself for letting me go.“ ...
      Is it a crime to fall in love?
      Rosella had never thought that she would be trapped in a web of politics, lies, deception, and misunderstandings.
      What she wanted was love but received only pain and betrayal.
      It is the story of a broken Empress, of her struggles inside a place full of ruthless schemes.

      "How could you give me to any other man, I waited for you so long ! Did you ever love me or not?" asked Rosella

      "You know darling! everything is fair in love and war!" Nicholas smirked.

      "I wish that we would have never met in this lifetime and I pray, that we will not meet each other in the next one" screamed Rosella...

      Even if I fall in love with someone new, it could never be the way I loved you...

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/YOUR-BETRAYING-LOVE
      Suggestions and comments are welcome! :)

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