May1st DO YOU LIKE THE COVER. I REALLY WANTED TO USE IT BUT THEN I CONSIDERED MY STORY'S MOTIVE AND SINCE I HAD CHANGED THE TITLE FROM STEALING THE EMPEROR'S HEART TO THE 10TH CONCUBINE IS A HEARTROBBER, THEN IT MEANT THAT THIS PICTURE IS BEST FOR YOUR NOVEL AND IT WOULD LOOK REALLY GOOD IF YOU USED IT. I LIKE THE ONE I'M USING MORE. SO LONG AS YOU USE IT I SWEAR TO NEVER USE IT. YOU CAN FIND many PICTURES OF THAT KIND ON PINTERST.COM.

      stella2138 I have used it, it's beautiful, thanks so much, I will also suggest that you download this Grammarly app, it's for correcting the mistakes in writing, someone just introduced it to me, believe me, its super awesome

          RedSonia Thanks so much. I haven't been able to write anything in the past couple of weeks due to exams but I'll definitely look at the first 2 chapters again. Thank you!

              RedSonia Hey, I've rewritten the first chapter and i'd like to ask you to read it and tell me your opinions.

                  Rewriting stuff from the first chapter seems a hassle. I guess it really pays to be proficient in your grammar and word of choice.

                    XOMatsumaeohana by the way, can you take a look at my work. Ypu do not have to finish everything I wrote so far. Just give me a feedback here if you do not wish to review. Land Warrior is the title of my story by the way.

                        Hey guys I'm back after a bunch of exams and other stuff. I'd like to promote a novel that I've been working on called Discovering Evil. I've rewritten the first chapter so hopefully things make a bit more sense. For those who have read the previous first chapter please read the one I've rewritten and tell me which one you prefer. Here's the information about my novel.

                        Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13877972605909605
                        Title: Discovering evil
                        Genre: fantasy
                        Synopsis:
                        "Cecelia the night in coming and we don't have time. This boy is about to wake up and when he does we must make sure that he is on our side. Do you want to be the reason this world is plunged into eternal darkness?" Saying this the woman grabbed Bren and placed her forefinger on his forehead. A warm, mellow glow shone from his head and a faint mark appeared.

                        "You say he's not ready but he's a strong one. Cecelia we must train him and you know it. There is no better protection for him than himself." Aunt Cecelia was wavering but eventually gave in.

                        "Bren things are about to get a little weird okay. You and I have powers. There are lots of people with powers but yours is a bit stronger than everyone else. Danger's coming so we're gonna have to send you away so you can learn to protect yourself from danger."

                        Magic is real.

                        There's a whole world of it.

                        Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn...

                        On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.

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