stella2138

VL_Night

JacksonWalker

Hello there! Can you give my entry for WPC#69 a shot?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13863676206841805/The-Rise-of-the-White-Lotus

It would be greatly appreciated if you leave your thoughts on the comment section since I know it's still not qualified for a complete review. In return, I will review your book with the little knowledge and experience I have as an author and reader.

          Hey Hyper_pumpkin

          I got you. I'll have to do it tomorrow, I don't have my computer on me so it would be inconvenient for me to do it now. But! I'll get to you, I promise.

          Sincerely, Jackson M. Walker

          (P.S. For everyone reading this message, or previous messages, I know that the letter; as in a letter you mail to clarify, format is annoying. That's just how I prefer to write it though, sorry for the inconvenience.)

              JacksonWalker,

              No rush, I understand. You can always check it out whenever you are free. :) Thank you!

              -BAJJ

                  Sorry stella2138

                  I meant to do yours today. My brain is having trouble functioning right now, I would like to be in my most optimal condition before I give you a review. Also, just so you know, I do harsh reviews, so if you want your book to keep having high ratings and you aren't confident in your writing skills then I'm not the right person for you. But, if you are looking to improve your writing as much as possible, despite the cost, then I'm your guy.

                  Sincerely, Jackson M. Walker

                      I'd like to read and review your book so please could you review mine too. And please be honest so I know where to improve. Thank you.

                      Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13877972605909605
                      Title: Discovering evil
                      Genre: fantasy
                      Synopsis:
                      "Cecelia the night in coming and we don't have time. This boy is about to wake up and when he does we must make sure that he is on our side. Do you want to be the reason this world is plunged into eternal darkness?" Saying this the woman grabbed Bren and placed her forefinger on his forehead. A warm, mellow glow shone from his head and a faint mark appeared.

                      "You say he's not ready but he's a strong one. Cecelia we must train him and you know it. There is no better protection for him than himself." Aunt Cecelia was wavering but eventually gave in.

                      "Bren things are about to get a little weird okay. You and I have powers. There are lots of people with powers but yours is a bit stronger than everyone else. Danger's coming so we're gonna have to send you away so you can learn to protect yourself from danger."

                      Magic is real.

                      There's a whole world of it.

                      Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn...

                      On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.

                        Antinous I left a review. Could you take a look at mine? Duality.

                        The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

                        From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

                            BAJJ Sure. I'll review your novel if you wouldn't mind giving mine a review as well. Thanks, fellow writer!

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