BAJJ Sure. I'll review your novel if you wouldn't mind giving mine a review as well. Thanks, fellow writer!

    10 days later

    Antinous I posted a review to your novel, and commented on few chapters.
    I can see that with each next chapter, the quality is improving! Keep on writing!
    I'm keeping your novel in my library and look forward to updates.

    Suggestion: maybe you want to re-write first and second chapter. First one especially. I found it a bit confusing. But from chapter 3 onwards, the writing style improved significantly and it was a really enjoyable read.

        AgileRampler review done.
        my novel s
        The 10th concubine is a heart robber.
        please be honest in your reviews

            May1st review done. please dont mind my harsh review. gimme a harsh one in return.
            recall i changed my books title to
            THE 10TH CONCUBINE IS A HEART ROBBER

                stella2138 wow you have lots of books. I will review yours. Have you started reading my novel? I hope you can also give review on the content. I will take time to read yours. :)

                  stella2138 okay, I shall read the story right away. I shall post my review after reading ten chapters of your work.

                  By the way the first chapter is interesting. I am hooked. I shall put the story in my library.

                    stella2138 it's nice of you to be honest, but can you give a tip, what kind of cover do you think suits the story, I will check out your book now and make sure I give you a massive massive massive harsh harsh review😛😛

                        May1st I think anime picture of a young man who has an expressionless face. he is handsome and looks really hot. he's hugging a lady that only reaches his chest. her eyes are closed with a satisfied smile on her face as she hugs him back.
                        one of the man's hand is on her head caressing it tenderly. the girl's hands are tied around his waist.

                        man! the idea is a bit much, right? I got this idea from your title, the aura it carries and the synopsis.

                            stella2138 she is still playing hard to get, but that might happen soon, and I want to let you know that you have kill me right now, the idea is beautiful and well appreciated, but where can i obtain such photo 😢😢😢😢😢😢

                                stella2138 I went through a lot of trouble to obtain the present one, am not in my country presently and my movement is restricted, I can't step outside my boss house, but I just stole a nice screen shot of a good looking girl from one of my favourite comics, can I use that?

                                    stella2138 I have an app that can reshape any picture to the size of my choice, thanks for your advice, I didn't get to bully you enough in the review😏, your story is good

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