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Good evening guys, I am new like most of the people here. I would like some review in my work. Here is one of my works...

https://m.webnovel.com/book/13802069006408505

Thank you...

Allen_Clay012 ill review

stella2138 Thank you very much! I promise to review in return

Allen_Clay012 tell me the name of your book. THERE'S A PROBLEM WITH YOUR LINK

Allen_Clay012 Review done.

xWangan do a review swap with me?

stella2138 Alright.

stella2138 Oh, sorry heheh... here it is by the way.

Flash Point: Easting

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13802069006408505/Flash-Point%3A-Easting

Allen_Clay012 stella2138 You guys might check up my novel as well.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13896116005069505/

Antinous
I added your novel to my library. I will read+review it shortly.

I hope you find time to check out my novel. Honest reviews are appreciated. :)

Here is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13300478706416005/35703250929895451/Is-this-destiny%3F
Title: "Is this destiny?"

Allen_Clay012

I added your novel to my library. I will read+review it shortly.

I hope you find time to check out my novel. Honest reviews are appreciated.
Here is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13300478706416005/35703250929895451/Is-this-destiny%3F
Title: "Is this destiny?"

RedSonia Thanks I am reading your story as we speak. I am writing my review too...

stella2138 Hi! Can you also review mine, and I'll review yours? Here's the link to my work:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11802490806529505/Milady's-Fine-Gentleman

Thank you! xoxo

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13926912306416905/Asura's-Wrath
I hope you find time to review mine.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13831938005525305

Hi guys i am also new to writing and this is my first ever work, i hope you can find time to leave a review :)
Thank you!

Mine is: can't believe I fell in love with you

Antinous I posted a review to your novel, and commented on few chapters.
I can see that with each next chapter, the quality is improving! Keep on writing!
I'm keeping your novel in my library and look forward to updates.

Suggestion: maybe you want to re-write first and second chapter. First one especially. I found it a bit confusing. But from chapter 3 onwards, the writing style improved significantly and it was a really enjoyable read.

midnight_bloom sure