BAJJ , I'd love to.. Will search for your book.

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      BAJJ I already reviewed your story. I find it a bit slow for it's pace in the first five chapters. Maybe I'll drop another review if I read more. Maybe it may change my mind.

          Allen_Clay012 Yeah. I saw it just this morning. Though I linked the 2nd novel instead of GGGB, I still appreciate your detailed insights regarding my first book. ehhehe. hope you can continue reading it and tell me more about it despite that it has a FL. :D THANK YOU!! :D

              gents46 thanks! I linked my book for easier find. I'll queue yours :) please be honest as I accept harsh constructive criticism for me to improve my writing skills as an author. Thankyou :)

                  BAJJ sure, i just start reading and haven't discovered any flaw so far

                      If anyone is interested, this is my novel. I can return the favour of anyone is interested in review swap.

                      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13785829206271605

                      Miyeon had a huge crush on him from her highschool days and when he left, she figured out that she held no weight in his heart.

                      Striped of her title and status, Miyeon now lives as an ordinary citizen with decent life. However, when he shows up after years, Miyeon could see that her feelings for him didn't leave her.

                      Will she chase after those feelings or forget about him?

                        Mavislin11 done! Wow that was really refreshing. Only one major complaint and honestly if you fix that I can see the views increasing. Mind you it also means redoing all your chapters. Good luck.

                          Hello! If anyone has time please check this novel of mine. It's still on it's early phase but I really need a blunt and constructive review so I will know what to improve to make it better and more interesting! If you're done just let me know, i will gladly give back the favor. Thank you 😊

                          Title: Her Seduction Games

                          Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/14095585405321305

                          Synopsis: Waking up in an unfamiliar life is no easy. Especiallly if your a woman who just got your heart betrayed, broken, and stabbed.

                          Ingrid Han's thirst for revenge was severe. But what can a mere vengeful soul can do? Fotunately, she was chosen by a system to be it's host. It promised to grant her a wish. In exchange, she just need to fill the required Merit Points by completing the missions that it gave her.

                          Normally a host's job is to ensure that the main characters of the world that they entered obtained their happy ending, but not on Ingrid's case, as what she needed to do is to break this very couple apart.

                          Everytime she transmigrated, she always found out that the pair already formed a bond in one way or another. So she fabricated numerous schemes in order to keep Male Lead by her side. That's how low Ingrid can get for the system to grant her greatest desire that slowly being burned out by that mysterious obsidian eyes.

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