Webnovel.Forum

Lappidappi So far I've read up to chapter 3 of your other novel. It's far more interesting than your game producer novel in my opinion. As of now, I don't have any major comments about it except grammar mistakes. I'll make a document for all the chapters so far and send it to you on discord.

Mr_Scary_Cat

Thank you for your honest opinion!

It was really helpful to hear a professional opinion. I am going to try and change some things, to make the character feel more alive. To the point about plot: you’re completely right, I started and still am writing without any outline.

Yes the other one I found more interesting too. But sadly I got some back problems, and couldn’t continue writing with my pc in a sitting position. That’s the reason I started the System story on my phone, and because the reactions were much better than the other, I kept going with it.

Mr_Scary_Cat
I have Discord, just it’s difficult for me use it, as I am right now in a foreign country without real WLAN..

Would it be possible to correspond over E-mail till then?

Mr_Scary_Cat I also need an honest critique. Hope you check mine too.
Title: Her Cupid, His Cupid
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14200622805618505
and
TItle: Tales of the Supremes
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12316009105249005

Thank you so much in advance...

Lappidappi Of course, we can talk over email! The system one is a comedy, so of course, it would have those kinds of reactions. Comedies can attract an audience quicker than a serious story, but it might fall flat eventually when jokes get old.

MyCharacterLeads Hello! The amount of books I'm editing is actually starting to have a toll on me. I'll only edit Her Cupid His Cupid since it's a new one. I'll only edit the latest chapter of the Tales of Supremes grammar-wise

Mr_Scary_Cat That would be fine..
Thank you a lot...

I don't mind giving a hand. I already spend most of my time reading novels here

Hi there, I am trying to become a better so any critique will be appreciated.
Title: Delicious Chaos
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14224966806759605
If you do check it out, thank you very much.

Mr_Scary_Cat Is it possible in discord?

Deym I missed the free stuff. How about I pay through Gcash? Hahaha just kidding. I will have some inquiries if you don't mind. I'll just PM probably for the details.

Allen_Clay012 You can contact me through email or discord :)

Mr_Scary_Cat ok