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Hi:)
This is my story. It's called Her Sole Desire.

Her revenge, her desire, the only thing she came back for.

Her father sent her abroad in order to protect her, however in the end he couldn’t even protect himself.

Now she comes back less innocent, less naïve, and with knowledge of how the world turns.

She doesn’t want anyone else’s help. It’s her own personal business. So why is it when Lawyer Han offers her his hand, she finds him so very attractive?

Edited by Glowing Butterfly

Thanks:)

Primate Thank you. I will soon return the favour.

Primate
Thank you. The link below your name in the signature links to something by Sighn. Was trying to check it out

My books are different to what you'll find here. Completely. I don't write to mass cliches, but rather to a very grain-small niche that has kind of left me hanging out in cold at the moment :eyes:

My flagship novel is Zaldizko
Genre: Magical Realism
Tags; Historical Fantasy - YA Fantasy - LGBTQ - BL - Gay Protagonist - Brotherhood - Swords and Magic - Order of Knights - Underworld - Action - Adventure

Set in an alternative Jazz Age. Famine is a man who will do anything, fight anyone to save his three brothers who have been kidnapped to an industrial city called Apocalypse. This story is a gunslinging, sword fighting action-adventure wild ride to rescue the family.

Its sequel is The Fourth Zaldizko
Genre: Magical Realism
Tags; Historical Fantasy - YA Fantasy - LGBTQ - BL - Gay Protagonist - Brotherhood - Swords and Magic - Order of Knights - Underworld - Action - Adventure

Following directly after Zaldizko with the same ensemble. This story looks deeper into the world and characters with the premise of saving the baby brother as the plot driver. There are more BL in this one since the MC and LI have become an official couple.

• My book perks: 99% flawless grammar, probably to the point that it reads strange since it's fluent and intuitive.
• Cons: My style of writing can be subtle and uses a bit of symbolism, so somethings will likely go over heads. I guess it doesn't help when I'm not writing to a specific trope or cliche, so there will be elements where it feels lacking, is missed or minds do not compute.

OKelley Thanks. I've corrected it. My bad.

Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
Author: Pathway to Eternity

Sorry for the mix-up in the link to my work. I mistakenly used Singhe's link. I've corrected it. Thanks for pointing it out.

Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
Author: Pathway to Eternity

IceSnowball please pardon me. The old link was a wrong link. That belongs to Singhe. I've corrected it now. This is my link.

Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
Author: Pathway to Eternity

Sigheti This is my link Sighe. I've been mistakenly using your link. Solitary meditation is having its effect on me. I've now corrected it.

Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
Author: Pathway to Eternity

Hello, I am a new writer and I will take any critique I can get, The only way you can improve is if you know your faults.
Title: Delicious Chaos
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14224966806759605

This is a fantasy novel where chaos is the mc's power and where he will mostly need to talk and trick hius way into spreading chaos. This is just for me to have fun but a read will be appreciated.

I have started a new fantasy novel: The Reluctant Necromancer -- only two chapters so far. I would appreciate any comments or reviews.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/14240071106802505/The-Reluctant-Necromancer

marjzach2012
I rest my case
If you don't mind to review the work of a daoist then it's all good. Pathway to Eternity is the name of my work and this is the link Pathway to Eternity

Immortality is achieved through the Dao.