May1st Man , I have already left there a review some time ago, don't you remember

    MiniAce It's ok, you are not late either. I wish to know whether you wanted a friendly review or a suggestion feedback? Plus tell me the name of your story not the link.

      _Sha

      Thanks for the replyyy and I would prefer a friendly review also suggestion here? If it isn't asking for too much πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… and the name is "The World We Do Not Know"

        MiniAce Hi, can you check out my novel in return please and leave an honest review? Thank you!

          _Sha Could you take a look at mine, Duality?

          The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

          From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

            _Sha That's my completed work. This is a new one 'scratch head'

              _Sha

              Please don't forget to review my story Sha samaπŸ™πŸ™

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