ihateyounot https://creativenovels.com/novel/a-i/ and https://www.webnovel.com/book/13642741005578305 thanks in advance! <3
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What harm this would do? At least it is honest and could improve me also.
So here is my link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14435092105336005/The-priestess-of-Rodona
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Friendly reminder to read and follow the conditions before posting your link(s).
Mine are only 11 chapters for now sir, so you can quickly go through it and suggest me if I'm prolonging the story too much without bringing the main elements or if the story just sucks not an order, just a request
Joan_Ninja_Hen Thank you for spending the time and creating such a detailed review!
Sure, I'll bite.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart
I believe you have already read a fair share of it though.
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ihateyounot please give mine a try as well, i wanna improve
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14076265606317405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305041843
Please try out my novel, A Bend in Time.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14576125306898605/A-Bend-in-Time
Before there ever was a boy that ever lived in a cupboard on Four Privet Drive, there was a similar boy in a far worse home that lived on Spinnerโs End. We all know the tale of that abused boy who grew up to become a bitter spy. But not all tales end the same for in the many parallel worlds that exist in the universe there are far better endings, and equally as many worse ones. This is a tale of one such condemned universe that for better or for worse choose to change its own fate.
EsliEsma Added to que, here's mine
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14228185605700305
ihateyounot Whoops for some reason I skipped that last condition, so please feel free to skip mine. Sorry, I'd hate to waste your time. I don't mean that in a bad way, but the condition is right there on the board. :)
TWISTED LIFE IN KOREA AND TANGLED JOURNEY IN HARRY POTTER.
ihateyounot Awesome! Bring on the critics. I ain't not cry baby.
Book title: "My way to you."
Link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12021185405774505
Synopsis:
About a girl name Ariana who was sold to a brother at the age of 12 by her jealous mother. Do to a blow to the head she unlocks her power and memories of a past life and decides to change the sex industry by making it into a maid cafe. It is her adventure of finding out who she is, where she came from and why she died in her past life while trying to stay out of the hands of the church who are abducting people who have jewel like eyes, trying to controls her blood that comes to life, fighting to keep her love, and trying to walk the right path or else be destroyed by the Lumas, the very creatures she gave life to.
Tags:
Romance, mystery, magical realm, fluff, violence, adventure, school, food, transmigration.
Schedule:
Five chapters per week, trying to do daily but the chapters average 3000 words per chapter.
Novel Status:
Ongoing
Book title: Hinder-Rella
Link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11241536305310005
Synopsis:
Twist in Cinderella, Olivia's story begins with her wanting to work at her father's company but her father won't let her cut corners and let's her interview for a janitorial position. She happily takes the job and tries to grow up as an independent woman. The ML, Eli falls for her first, her stepmother is relatively nice and the twin stepsisters are like night and day until her father is murdered in front of her. Then everything changes, her life becomes endangered, her home is taken away, her love is stolen and more importantly the little life inside her is being coveted by her stepmother. She needs to find a way to break a curse placed on her blood line while keeping her stepmother from exploding with rage. Can she win her love back? Who placed the curse? Who can she trust? Who murdered her father?
Romance, Fluff, Parental Abuse, Reincarnation, Curse, Murder, School
Novel Status:
Completed
@ihateyouno Do try mine. I hope you like it.
Novel name: Our Lovestory
Hey there.
I've kind of been stuck at my story, been away from it for a while but I am currently thinking of continuing with it and finally finishing it. I am close to the end but the last chapter left me feeling barren of ideas.
I would appreciate a more objective overview of the story as it might get the inspiration juices flowing and help me decide whether to modify the story some way or just continue with the previous plan.
The book is called Dandelion Lover and has 38 chapters currently published.
Here is the synopsis for it:
Kate Ross is a slightly awkward young adult that has problems fitting into the norms of society. Her friends are all married and even with children while she is still struggling to find the right job. One day her luck changes when she is hired to work as a copywriter for a small company.
Meeting new people and making new friends becomes easy when she joins the workforce, but when her care towards her boss becomes more than she could allow herself, her once quiet life becomes filled with struggles to keep her own feelings under control.
Whether she falls prey to her feelings or she manages to fight against them, one thing is for sure, life is never as easy as it seems and it is up to her to face her own weaknesses or to stand up and fight for what she wants.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11776550106516605/Dandelion-Lover
ihateyounot Haha, I am quite scared to show my story but I am writing for fun after all. It has 40 chapters + 1 prologue, so I hope it can live up to your expectations. If you do take this up, thanks a lot! My English is readable, I focus a lot on emotions and try my best to bring them alive.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13276920906343905/Not-So-Confident
Again, thank you!
ihateyounot
I've been sort of worried about the pacing of my story, so if you can, give me some honest feedback?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14689633206379005/Crocodile-Tears
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14612719105943405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306655992
Name: Cadent Star
Would like an honest opinion about the beginning of my story so far.
ihateyounot do you have discord or something? I have few questions to ask you.
ShinSungmi yes, under the same username. You can probably find me in the group for authors.