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ihateyounot this is mine
https://m.webnovel.com/book/14442945206446105
Surely be as honest as possible
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/14348658506135305/Auntie-toasts-the-VRMMORPG
Thank you very much. I have nearly no reviews because I refuse to do review swaps, so I need it badly :).
ihateyounot Here's mine. <3
It's already on 25 Chapters as I post this comment.
ihateyounot If possible, I would ask you to take a look at my novel, Duality.
The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.
From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.
I'm new to webnovel so I'd take any constructive criticism thrown my way. And though you said you read any genre, I still would like to warn you that my story have BL elements 
ihateyounot hi, here is mine.
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14567282606865905
Title: I deserve a second chance
Thank you! 
Please go through mine, it is a fantasy type but I hope you will like it. :)
ihateyounot https://creativenovels.com/novel/a-i/ and https://www.webnovel.com/book/13642741005578305 thanks in advance! <3
What harm this would do? At least it is honest and could improve me also.
So here is my link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14435092105336005/The-priestess-of-Rodona
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Friendly reminder to read and follow the conditions before posting your link(s).
Mine are only 11 chapters for now sir, so you can quickly go through it and suggest me if I'm prolonging the story too much without bringing the main elements or if the story just sucks
not an order, just a request 
Joan_Ninja_Hen Thank you for spending the time and creating such a detailed review!
Sure, I'll bite.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart
I believe you have already read a fair share of it though.
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ihateyounot please give mine a try as well, i wanna improve
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14076265606317405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305041843
Please try out my novel, A Bend in Time.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14576125306898605/A-Bend-in-Time
Before there ever was a boy that ever lived in a cupboard on Four Privet Drive, there was a similar boy in a far worse home that lived on Spinner’s End. We all know the tale of that abused boy who grew up to become a bitter spy. But not all tales end the same for in the many parallel worlds that exist in the universe there are far better endings, and equally as many worse ones. This is a tale of one such condemned universe that for better or for worse choose to change its own fate.
EsliEsma Added to que, here's mine
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14228185605700305
ihateyounot Whoops for some reason I skipped that last condition, so please feel free to skip mine. Sorry, I'd hate to waste your time. I don't mean that in a bad way, but the condition is right there on the board. :)
TWISTED LIFE IN KOREA AND TANGLED JOURNEY IN HARRY POTTER.
ihateyounot Awesome! Bring on the critics. I ain't not cry baby.
Book title: "My way to you."
Link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12021185405774505
Synopsis:
About a girl name Ariana who was sold to a brother at the age of 12 by her jealous mother. Do to a blow to the head she unlocks her power and memories of a past life and decides to change the sex industry by making it into a maid cafe. It is her adventure of finding out who she is, where she came from and why she died in her past life while trying to stay out of the hands of the church who are abducting people who have jewel like eyes, trying to controls her blood that comes to life, fighting to keep her love, and trying to walk the right path or else be destroyed by the Lumas, the very creatures she gave life to.
Tags:
Romance, mystery, magical realm, fluff, violence, adventure, school, food, transmigration.
Schedule:
Five chapters per week, trying to do daily but the chapters average 3000 words per chapter.
Novel Status:
Ongoing
Book title: Hinder-Rella
Link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11241536305310005
Synopsis:
Twist in Cinderella, Olivia's story begins with her wanting to work at her father's company but her father won't let her cut corners and let's her interview for a janitorial position. She happily takes the job and tries to grow up as an independent woman. The ML, Eli falls for her first, her stepmother is relatively nice and the twin stepsisters are like night and day until her father is murdered in front of her. Then everything changes, her life becomes endangered, her home is taken away, her love is stolen and more importantly the little life inside her is being coveted by her stepmother. She needs to find a way to break a curse placed on her blood line while keeping her stepmother from exploding with rage. Can she win her love back? Who placed the curse? Who can she trust? Who murdered her father?
Romance, Fluff, Parental Abuse, Reincarnation, Curse, Murder, School
Novel Status:
Completed