fagfaghahadshs I honestly believe that you have something here that can become a big thing. I've written my review and wish you luck and in all seriousness, if you ever need any help I'll be more than willing to assist.

      Nightmare_weaver thanks! I assure you that I won't hesitate asking for help. Your novel is also promising so keep doing what you're good at: Writing! 😊

          Daisy_T I read five chapters. The story looks interesting, but there are a lot of obscure and blurry moments. The picture is unclear. As a reader, I don’t understand everything, who are the main characters, what they are running from, what they want, who is chasing them? Why do those who persecute with perseverance in the beginning and in the middle, in the end, just give up?

            I'm here to shamelessly plug a new novel I have just started published recently. (around a week or so) :smile:

            Title: Path of the Lilies
            Genre: Eastern Fantasy
            Leading gender: Female

            Synopsis:
            Ever since she was a child, Ye Jiao was treated as trash in Chen Kingdom. Suffering from countless beatings and endless humiliation, Ye Jiao endured the harsh life without being able to do anything. Only a rare few cared for her and showed her warmth in this cruel world.
            But the Heavens didn’t give her the chance to live peacefully.
            It took the little things she had and pushed her over the edge into the bottomless abyss. Filled with despair and sadness, she had to hide and bide her time as a lot of people wished for her death.

            “I have lost everything; you can’t take anything else from me. But I will gain much from this in my path as Eon Energy Master---I’ll not give up and someday, I’ll reach the peak.”

            Her small hand plucked the stem of the white lily flower and gripped it tight, with determination flashing across her eyes. Trash? Her small lips curved up, tinged in mockery.
            Even if everyone around her wished to kill her, she would never give up.
            She will show them who the real trash was and become the greatest genius in the world!
            Even if the entire world was against her, she would not cower.
            She will reach the peak.

            Thank you for taking the time to read this post :heart:

              Nightmare_weaver I've still got a review to write and you seem to have a few on your docket. If you drop by and review my novel, I'll be sure to get to yours.

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