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Chryiss Me currently fiddling with my nails whether to let myself burn in fire or not!!!
I think an iron needs to be heated and hammered so that it gets good value and I am no exception here!!! Letting me be under your critical guidance!!!

Title-My Reincarnated Inamorata!
Link- https://www.webnovel.com/book/16076987206936205/My-Reincarnated-Inamorata!

Note- please read synopsis before proceeding to the chapters!!!

The story is just 4 days old and has around 8 chapters, I thought of asking once I reach the level where I am confident enough but the hell-bent assignments of mine are making me loose hopes in writing so I need some critics right now which can boast my energy to do better!!!

Ps- I am still a one-week-old writer so you can accept my story to be below average so make sure to put all the guidance which I need to follow strictly wether it be arc development or writing scenario!!!

Thank you!!!

Chryiss Thanks again. I'm now digesting it.
Regarding the awkward sentence structure and syntax issues - this isn't my first language, I learned English by listening to people talk and not in school. What I know is self-taught so I'm sure my writing is full of it. Thanks for the tip in the comments too, I'll check the rest of the chapters because I have a feeling I've done it more than once.
I'm in the early stages of my writing journey, I had self-doubt and lack of confidence for years, but I got encouragement to join the WPC from another writer friend. The style is basic because I'm now discovering my own way of storytelling.
Regarding character development and worldbuilding - I planned this story to be a long one and I'm trying to write it in a way that I won't give away too much at once. I have a long road planned for Karen, she won't have it easy, but she'll have some wins too because life isn't just good or just bad, it's both (from my experience).
In conclusion, I'm so happy you wrote this detailed review of my story. It's really kind of you to share your thoughts with us newbies. I'm looking forward to more of these. Wish you all the best.
*** I'll post this as a reply on my page as well.

Ooh Lilliny is up for the chopping block.

Hello! This is my first story and translation, please give it a look ! I want to know if this is worthy of my translation
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/15201396505386605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306159928

I hope xianxia/eastern fantasy cultivation isn't too overused for you to get bored too fast! I would be honored if you could give mine a try! This is my first and I'm just about to finish my first arc. Planning to take a break after and reflect to see if I should continue/drop/edit or remake. If you could give me some tips that would be great!

Title: Beyond The Primordials
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15210648305420705/Beyond-The-Primordials

@gents46 um, you might get in trouble with the Yue-bot of you keep asking for review swaps here. There's recently only one place allowed for swaps. It's the pinned monthly shameless plug thread.

Adding link to this month's plug thread. https://forum.webnovel.com/d/35255-february-2020-promote-your-novels-here-review-swap