Note: If ur old and have a reputation, then please dont drop here, especially if u have a huge count of chapters, ur story maybe good but Im very picky on genres. Besides your path is already set in stones

Id prefer if the ones who post here are new and those who think their work is unnoticed, I hope those who post here have also few chapter counts so I can sound more genuine, since obviously I cant read them all. And no, im not asking for a review swap so please dont follow me and give me a review, Im already satisfied with my feedbacks.

I was hoping I could be as blunt as possible with your first few chapters because this is were the readers begin and they will decide if they want to continue or not. But if I dislike your work I would still rate you high for support, but I would give you notes on where you think u need improvements, thanks.

I also prefer if those people who just started this week or month,

WAR GROUNDS

Thank you for this opportunity.

This book has only 2 chapters, one of which is a prologue. I'm interested in knowing what you think of the plot and/or setting more than anything else. So if you could keep an eye on that aspect in case you review I'd be very thankful!

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17773842505829505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313338079

Hi there! I just joined wn about a week ago, and I'm still a newbie. Would you mind reviewing my story? I would gladly hear from your opinions. I'm open to any criticism

Title: The Whisper In The Ice

Genre: Fantasy

Status: On-going

Synopsis:

In order to find her father who had disappeared since the age of 10, Roxie was sent by her mother to a special school far from her home. Due to she had already discovered her power, accidentally. In her new school, she met some great new friends, as well as new enemies. This made her distracted from the focus of her main goal, which was to find her father. But, with the help of her friends, she managed to get some information about him, along with a little sprinkle of adventure on the way.

Will Roxie ever find out about her father?

Link to it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-whisper-in-the-ice_17718418005514805

itsmeTuba okay finished

HotRedFlaming
It's my new book. It's only have one chapter. If you don't mind please check mine too.
The untold witch:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-untold-witch_17762117006893805

https://www.webnovel.com/book/17554509105475505

started less than a month ago, writing about all the history stuff, military&wars, kingdom building. Thanks mate for the opportunity.

HotRedFlaming Thank you. Its very helpful. Thanks a lot for giving such a constructive feedback review.

I am sorry... I failed to understand your instructions. Just ignore what I posted earlier. Thank you! :)

I've unnoticed for a long time and starting to join a contest with new novel. TT

Mine is 4 chapter already (3 and 1 prologue) if you don't mind

Dragon Ratio

Hi if you have time, please do a review in my novel. I started this a month ago. The story is currently ar 57 chapters. Its title is "Into the Zombie World".

Here is the link to the novel.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/into-the-zombie-world_17265526105108805

Thank you very much.

TrinityPhoenix

itsmeTuba

Filea

Done with urs, I hope I didnt hurt your feelings, u all had good potentials by the way, u had ur share of strengths and weaknesses. I hope u can improve.

And Im.gonna stop here for now, lol Others are for later

Neil_Ads ur work seems already there and climbing, I dont think I would help much.

HotRedFlaming oh, okay. But I don't think so, I am always wiating for reviews so I can know my shortcomings to improve on them.

Hey, could you check out my book, It currently has 12 chapters,
You can be honest with your critique because I really need to know what Im doing wrong and how can I improve.
My book https://www.webnovel.com/book/16991910705054005
Thanks

HotRedFlaming.

Title:what is it like to be a Knight
Genre:fantasy
Synopsis:
Blaze tries his best to become a knight

HotRedFlaming Go to the market.

Mine here. Thanks for any reply.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/run-on-shadow's-edge_17685005605315205

HotRedFlaming hello I would gladly take the offer https://m.webnovel.com/book/17481893905094005 I would gladly take your honest opinions and criticisms thank you very much :)

this is my book and I am looking for honest reviews. I appreciate the ones so far but I want an honest critic. Thank you.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16711946006065005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303248177

Hello, there. I'm excited that you're doing this and offering people some form of constructive outlet for their creativity ease, don't spare me, tell me what you think
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Check out the market I'm offering to review two books for free go to the market to check out the rules

Mine only have 7 chapters and I struggle with daily updates, but I hope you can help me by giving tips. I felt like my writing style is too direct and rough, so I worry that my readers can't understand what I'm trying to convey.

Please don't hold back.

Title: Lightning's Attraction

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/lightning's-attraction_17733820506737905

Synopsis: Pushed between two choices; A dead end and a promising future, Xing Zishen believes that he chose the right thing. Whereas his elders and fellow disciples who know nothing of him, nothing of his past, and nothing of the hole in his heart greatly disapproves.

*Sigh "Stick around for now. They'll think I've got you already."

Genre: Adventure, Cultivation, Bromance

heyitsbluejay please check out my book thanks. I have entered in spirity awards and it's signed contract thanks

At this point he left.Guys stop trying.Its too much for him.Xd I presume for he is offline and does not repsond anymore.

Book Title (Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination)

Synopsis
"If I can't conquer your heart, I will conquer your land."

He smirks in the heat of the moment, with drumming heart and trepidation from those audacious words he just declared.

And finally, he dealt a spit for his last growl:
"This world shall know Domination!"

An Ex-General punished with a death sentence, transmigrated from the present back to the past years before his country was colonized.

Or so he thought?

Armed with the experience and knowledge as a General, he declares to conquer the world!

Read as the story befitting of its title, unravels the mysteries of this newfound world, how will he conquer everything in his path to domination? The story behind his punishment, and the people that surround him.

A Glorious Saga that re-writes history!
...

This is my first novel on this platform, may you like reading my novel!

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/veiled-saga%3A-conquest-and-domination_17653481206236305

Suezaro dude...

Pleasedeteme can't i? am new here mine is just two weeks old hehe

i keep reading them but I just cant keep up,

Hey... I have recently joined webnovel. I was invited from wattpad to share my story on this platform. Till now I have updated the prologue and two chapters. New readers are welcomed along with there opinions. Here is the link of my novel.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17808355606147405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313197602

Title: Revenge Through The Broken Window
Genre: Science-fiction

Synopsis:
It's a story full of suspense, thriller and romance. Some parts of this story are related to real life scenes.
Here's a girl named Jupi who is a graduation final year student. She visits a hospital to grab the happiest moment of her after facing a lots of stuggle. But these visits turns out to be the twisting point of her life.
Now who brings the twists and how!! To know this start reading the story.

Suezaro The poor dudecant keep up anymore.

Title: Path of Supreme Being

Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/path-of-supreme-being_17803268105985805

Genres: Adventure. Action. Adventure. Reincarnation, Fan-Fiction, Marvel

Synopsis:

I Re-Birth on a different planet with a different name and different family and friends.

In my 1st life, I was an Emperor, holding an army of millions I was named Alexander and was a 'MAN' close to 'GOD'

In my 2nd life, I live in a different name, different world and different family, the same for my 3rd life it was normal and peaceful

In my 4th life, I was once called 'Occupational hoarder' I'm a genius and talented person I can do everything and anything, I became a doctor, scientist, engineer, astronaut, etc, and cure multiple incurable diseases, illness and virus in the planet.

in my 5th life is quite tragic, my past life was discovered and because of that I was played and killed, but God gave me another chance and I was reborn again but not on a normal planet but 'different' planet.

It's called 'Marvel Universe'

Come and join me on this journey.

Extra info:
2 ~ 3 chapt/day ~ 1500 ~ 700 words each.
Read the first few chapters to get a proper feel of the novel. You will not be disappointed.

HotRedFlaming

https://www.webnovel.com/book/she's-just-a-mere-background-character_15824570105061205
I just read it, it's totally underrated. I seriously think it deserves more.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/17805779106132505

Thank You for the Opportunity!

Oh god where to start on one day I just barely finsihed two novels lol

Catson_kiyoyi

But WN standards it was 9/10

Story telling standards maybe at 6.8/10

I think, since it was a good parody, but Im gonna post it here since the author doesnt demand a review but you, lol.

For the flaws, first, I have went to many schools but I havent seen any gaming club, but I think this is passable since it might be realistic, but schools usually discourages unproductive stuffs, but regardless I think it was fine. And what does this club even do? Just play games entire hours? Next, I think the premise somewhat fell on the last chapter, I mean I thought the point of the story was for sachiko to stumble several times then at some point realize she was hopeless for Souta. But in the last chapter she became a president, and souta became the VP,. And also I think it was too early for sachiko to have such a high leverage. It would be interesting to see Sachiko entering the interview (by Souta) countless times, but fail, then resort to countless tactics, but fail again, yet she finds a way, those was what I expected. I want to see her struggle, but she became a pres even tho she aint much of a gamer, which I find kinda umm, not satisfying. But this was an early chap and the author seemed to have stopped but maybe this will still roll if the author continues his work. Cheers.

U could correct me tho these are just my opinions