Readoholic Can you review mine? It's a new story I'm writing it only has 2 chapters as of now, I just want some one to read it and give me some points and ideas what part should I improve.

I can review your story, but I might not do it as quickly, but I'll do it tonight.

Here's the link for my novel. Thanks!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/capture-the-elusive-mandarin_17883737405371405

    Anyone else interested in a review swap still? I won't request for a review just for the novel to look better, but an intuitive review after giving each other's work a quick read. If interested, you can either wait until tomorrow until I check the forum again, or dm me on discord, Nightin367#4291

      @JustLikeWriting777 @SolAce will post my review to your novels later.
      If anyone is still interested to swap, send me a DM in my discord: Jyojiko#9913
      I won't be able to check your messages here, i'll be writing my story. Thanks a lot guys!

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