Anyone up for a review swap?

I'm writing a fantasy called "Mages of the North" you can find here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/mages-of-the-north%3A-the-adventure-begins_17791057805925605

I would recommend trying to get to chapter 7 when a new character is introduced, but the chapters re very short and get straight to the point.

    SnowPenguin

    finished reviewing yours. Sorry if I was a little critical; I tend to be blunt and honest with my reviews

      Avidfan i will left my comment 🤗 please, if you have time and can give some suggestions about the translation of my first novel in english i will thanks you! Im not english native .. when i read yours i will vote whit powerstone so you will know im reading and soporting you!

        Hello! Im new and Im not english native but Im writing my novel in Spanish and english, so if someone could let me know if Im doing it well I will thanks you so much! and I will left my review in your and suport your work whit my powerstons and votes..
        thanks!
        https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17158676305682805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306159928

          Anyone want to review swap? I have two stories but you can choose either one.

          First: Villain to Hero (it is LGBT, but not focus except him thinking about his crush only in the first chapter)
          Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17821839205077305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313534681

          Second: Hybrid’s Revelation( I started this yesterday and only have two chapters for now. This is a contest story so I don’t know if I can review swap with this?????) (Note: this is no romance but family and protection based)

          Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17889792105404905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313534681

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