Anyone want to review swap? I have two stories but you can choose either one.

First: Villain to Hero (it is LGBT, but not focus except him thinking about his crush only in the first chapter)
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17821839205077305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313534681

Second: Hybrid’s Revelation( I started this yesterday and only have two chapters for now. This is a contest story so I don’t know if I can review swap with this?????) (Note: this is no romance but family and protection based)

Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17889792105404905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313534681

    Title: Nirvana Sect Master system

    Synopsis: As the sole survivor of the entire town, Ace had lost all sense of direction in life until he awakened the Nirvana Sect system after being through a near death experience.

    But this made him question, why did the system choose me?

    Having created his sect and established a place he can call home, he once again questioned himself, why did the system give me this?

    Having fallen and rise, all he wanted to was find the answers to life and most importantly, the origin of the system which shouldn't have existed.

    With the path to the apex being full of thorns, the lost of his disciples is almost a must.

    "I'm sorry...if only I didn't make this decision."

    "I'm sorry...if only I wasn't this reckless."

    "I'm sorry...if only I wasn't this weak."

    Nails digging into his palm, ground dyed scarlet by blood. Tears streaked down his face, muffled by the merciless rain...

    What was his decision and why would all the mysteries revolve around him? Read on to join the mc's journey in seeking those answers.

    If anyone want to review swap or exchange writing tips, you can message me on discord, Nightin367#4291 as I'll reply much more quickly on discord than the forum.

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