pelzy
Honestly, I could use some reviews and constructive criticisms on my book :)

cover: https://64.media.tumblr.com/1fcc338842b9dabcdf3f104fd34c62a0/f6ff701efdd83cb9-9c/s2048x3072/00d539ba2a6d2fb340c803a713eabe41b5555ba0.png

Title: A Thousand Secret Kisses
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-thousand-secret-kisses_17909874506645805
Genre: Romantic Fantasy

Synopsis:
(This novel is set in modern times)

"One kiss wouldn't hurt, right?"

All Emilie wanted was to get home and wrap herself in her warm blanket with a packet filled with sugary heaven from her Dad's bakery, but it seemed fate had other plans.

Paired up with a boy who was physically incapable of love, and she who only knew so much from movies and novels, Emilie Bernard and Daniel Kim were given a task to help speed up the process of romance for others.

And if they failed, it could spell disaster for love and humanity as we knew it.

.........

I'm very open to creative criticism <3

      Dara_Manuel

      ok so here's mine don't forget to send yours!
      Honestly, I could use some reviews and constructive criticisms on my book :)

      cover: https://64.media.tumblr.com/1fcc338842b9dabcdf3f104fd34c62a0/f6ff701efdd83cb9-9c/s2048x3072/00d539ba2a6d2fb340c803a713eabe41b5555ba0.png

      Title: A Thousand Secret Kisses
      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-thousand-secret-kisses_17909874506645805
      Genre: Romantic Fantasy

      Synopsis:
      (This novel is set in modern times)

      "One kiss wouldn't hurt, right?"

      All Emilie wanted was to get home and wrap herself in her warm blanket with a packet filled with sugary heaven from her Dad's bakery, but it seemed fate had other plans.

      Paired up with a boy who was physically incapable of love, and she who only knew so much from movies and novels, Emilie Bernard and Daniel Kim were given a task to help speed up the process of romance for others.

      And if they failed, it could spell disaster for love and humanity as we knew it.

      .........

      I'm very open to creative criticism <3

          DaisukiDayoSenpai

          I'm going to check it out very soon :)!

          this is mine:
          Honestly, I could use some reviews and constructive criticisms on my book :)

          cover: https://64.media.tumblr.com/1fcc338842b9dabcdf3f104fd34c62a0/f6ff701efdd83cb9-9c/s2048x3072/00d539ba2a6d2fb340c803a713eabe41b5555ba0.png

          Title: A Thousand Secret Kisses
          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-thousand-secret-kisses_17909874506645805
          Genre: Romantic Fantasy

          Synopsis:
          (This novel is set in modern times)

          "One kiss wouldn't hurt, right?"

          All Emilie wanted was to get home and wrap herself in her warm blanket with a packet filled with sugary heaven from her Dad's bakery, but it seemed fate had other plans.

          Paired up with a boy who was physically incapable of love, and she who only knew so much from movies and novels, Emilie Bernard and Daniel Kim were given a task to help speed up the process of romance for others.

          And if they failed, it could spell disaster for love and humanity as we knew it.

          .........

          I'm very open to creative criticism <3

              nessiaart Here's mine

              The Almighty Creation

              Sypnosis;

              He tried to hold water in his fist
              But it only wet his sweaty palm;

              He tried to hold air in his fist
              And it dried his wet hand;

              He tried to hold fire in his empty fist
              But it left him with a burning sensation;

              He then tried to hold sand in his fist
              And it slipped not before giving relief;

              He realized Universe could not be held
              But it could be felt and sensed.

              ...

              What if someday you find out that there are gaps in the Universe? Society isn't as you Imagine. This is all a Facade.

              There are gaps in the universe. A boy with bad luck finds a gap without his knowledge.

              Follow the life of this boy to find out the secret of the Universe and the mystery of Life.

              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-almighty-creation_17932911306750305

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                  30keys
                  Hello there, I already gave your story a read, really cool setting and world you have created!

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