DaisukiDayoSenpai

I'm going to check it out very soon :)!

this is mine:
Honestly, I could use some reviews and constructive criticisms on my book :)

cover: https://64.media.tumblr.com/1fcc338842b9dabcdf3f104fd34c62a0/f6ff701efdd83cb9-9c/s2048x3072/00d539ba2a6d2fb340c803a713eabe41b5555ba0.png

Title: A Thousand Secret Kisses
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-thousand-secret-kisses_17909874506645805
Genre: Romantic Fantasy

Synopsis:
(This novel is set in modern times)

"One kiss wouldn't hurt, right?"

All Emilie wanted was to get home and wrap herself in her warm blanket with a packet filled with sugary heaven from her Dad's bakery, but it seemed fate had other plans.

Paired up with a boy who was physically incapable of love, and she who only knew so much from movies and novels, Emilie Bernard and Daniel Kim were given a task to help speed up the process of romance for others.

And if they failed, it could spell disaster for love and humanity as we knew it.

.........

I'm very open to creative criticism <3

      nessiaart Here's mine

      The Almighty Creation

      Sypnosis;

      He tried to hold water in his fist
      But it only wet his sweaty palm;

      He tried to hold air in his fist
      And it dried his wet hand;

      He tried to hold fire in his empty fist
      But it left him with a burning sensation;

      He then tried to hold sand in his fist
      And it slipped not before giving relief;

      He realized Universe could not be held
      But it could be felt and sensed.

      ...

      What if someday you find out that there are gaps in the Universe? Society isn't as you Imagine. This is all a Facade.

      There are gaps in the universe. A boy with bad luck finds a gap without his knowledge.

      Follow the life of this boy to find out the secret of the Universe and the mystery of Life.

      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-almighty-creation_17932911306750305

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          30keys
          Hello there, I already gave your story a read, really cool setting and world you have created!

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