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I am giving honest in-depth reviews, with paragraph comments included. If you do not mind brutal honesty that will still be constructive criticism (I promise I don't bite), put your story here.
I will do fifteen novels to start with; I am doing it on the weekend so if you don't see the reviews as soon as possible, it is because I am available on the weekends.

Disclaimer: I hate harem, so please no harem stories. I dislike romance and female lead, so I might or might not read it; it depends.
Other than that, every other genre is good with me.

Let's get the stories rolling!

I'll be happy to get an honest review if you are okay with reading bl (the romance is tooooo far ahead)

https://www.webnovel.com/book/what-!-the-gamemaster-and-the-top-player-are-dating-!-%5Bbl%5D_18308872905155405

https://www.webnovel.com/book/titan-legacy_18388589605486705

I'd love for you to review my book. I feel my writing is lacking in many areas, it'd be good to get an outsider to pinpoint those areas for me.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-final-act_18023426906124805

I'm open to constructive criticisms for the betterment of my story. Thank you very much

cherlyswan
You are 1/15

Are you fine with waiting until the weekend for the review?

Zephy
You are 2/15

Are you fine with waiting for your review until the weekend?

Saeven07
Your story seems interesting, I am not a fan of female lead, but if there is no romance I will read it.

Is there romance?

Thereviewer48

Of course, thank you.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-of-immortals_14896688705043505

Kingficher
You are 3/15

Are you fine with receiving your review on the weekend?

I'd appreciate it if you read mine and tell me what you think and how I could improve https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18102247105274305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314041075

I would be extremely happy for a brutally honest review. I haven't gotten much feedback past chapter 6 or so, and I want to know how people feel about these characters and events.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/death-the-most-high-the-demon-king_17982109905817605

Saeven07
Hmm...
I will check it out since you are not prioritizing it right now. If/when romance does come out, I will stop there.

You are 4/15

I will give a review on the weekend.

Joel_West
You are 5/15

I will get to the review on the weekend.

outpost76
I'm not a fan of female lead, but I will try it if there is no romance or barely any.

Does your story have romance?

Hmmm, there's a lot of honest reviewers recently. I guess I can use this for motivation. Anyways, here goes...

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-verlusian-conspiracy_16350144805643305

There's a bit of romance and some... scenes. However, that's not the focus of the story.

Thereviewer48 No, no romance. I got stuck with the genre when I chose female lead.

Please try https://m.webnovel.com/book/save-state_18431557406796605

Thank you in advance :)

outpost76
You will be 6/15

I will give your review on the weekend.

Allen_Clay012
Are you fine with me skipping the scene or skimming through the scene? If so, I will review you.

EleAxis
You will be 7/15

I will give the review on the weekend.

Thereviewer48 Sure, anything is fine by me.

I be happy if you do

Title: everything is going fine before they come
Link:https://m.webnovel.com/book/everything-is-going-fine-before-they-come_18463308306922705?bookId=everything-is-going-fine-before-they-come_18463308306922705&activeTab=

Title: dreamers or Musō-ka

Link:https://m.webnovel.com/book/mus%C5%8D-ka_18495052406057705

I be happy if you do

Title: everything is going fine before they come
Link:https://m.webnovel.com/book/everything-is-going-fine-before-they-come_18463308306922705?bookId=everything-is-going-fine-before-they-come_18463308306922705&activeTab=

Title: dreamers or Musō-ka

Link:https://m.webnovel.com/book/mus%C5%8D-ka_18495052406057705

Thereviewer48 yeah sure (:

If you'd like, you can check my novel Duality.

The writing starts somewhat rough, but I feel that it has improved a lot in later chapters.

I'd appreciate an honest review. Thank you!

https://www.webnovel.com/book/holy-world_17763204406900705

Thereviewer48 totally fine with that

If you want to try out my shounen novel, https://www.google.com/amp/s/m.webnovel.com/amp/book/18144494206590305

I believe I failed the moment I wrote a shounen novel, but what do you think?

Allen_Clay012
Okay.
8/15

If it ends up too much on the romance scenes and r18 scenes, I will stop and give review and stuff where I stopped at.

Kylle_Manza
I will only take dreamers cause the other story is romance, and it is a no for me.

So, 9/15 for the dreamers story.

JohnnyKbca
I don't think I can take yours. I already accepted someone that has romance and r18 scenes (which I will be skipping cause no for me).
I cannot accept another one. I'm sorry)

EmpRabbit
10/15

I will get to it on the weekend

Lazy_leon
11/15

Review will be there on the weekend

Midnight_Alpha

Your story is interesting, but how prominent is the romance? If it is a background thing and barely there, I can give it a try.

RazorIsSharp

I don't want to be rude here, but I literally said not to give me harem stories. I hate harem and would not make an exception to read it.

Sorry, I won't be doing your story.

Thereviewer48 Would you like to try out my book? I would appreciate paragraph comments and reviews so I could improve every aspect of my writing.
Here’s the link:
The Red Pill, https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-red-pill_18320343705207205

Thereviewer48

https://www.webnovel.com/book/pentakill-rebirth-of-the-legend_18491490905883305

Sorry it's pretty short currently since I started it a few days ago, but I honestly don't know if the beginning is even that catchy or worth reading to the majority of readers since I'm not that familiar with the genre. It's intended to be more of a realistic take on eSports so don't really expect typical Webnovel OP ML or systems if you do decide to read ig ;-;

Cuddles_Sempai13
12/15

I will be done on the weekend