yay!
I'm done with my review of your novel @miu_hozuki

now, who wants an honest review.
The story is super fluff, slow burn, and a refreshing read?
Just drop a review to mine and I'd go to yours
or you can send me a DM at discord----> SummerStardust#8540

Link for the novel:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/dandelion-memories-reincarnated-the-third-time-to-find-her-love_19716052205015505

    Bunny_Junnie Reviewed yours (check the review). In addition to the review I posted, between us, I also would like to add:
    - Some chapters have very lengthy paragraphs. It was hard to read for me. Please consider splitting long paragraphs into 3-5 lines max.
    - The first chapter starts with a lot of dialogue. Why not introducing more description so that the reader has more time to slowly assimilate who's who?
    - There are many grammar mistakes, even in the synopsis (he fall in love => he falls in love, from then he have to => he has to), please consider running your chapters through an advanced spell-checker. Try Word, or Grammarly (better).

    This is my honest review to help you get more readers :)

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