MissyRailae Reviewed! I enjoyed reading your chapters till the end. I was surprised in a good way by the [spoiler] early death, time-travel, and the "devil" - which really isn't. You will find more details on what I liked in your story in my review. I initially disliked the main character, but it can be seen she was made purposely arrogant and unlikeable due to her horrible personality. However, she starts to change soon enough. I expect a lot for the character development. Let's see!

In addition, I would like to point out that there are some sentences that sound a bit awkward, and some tenses that seem misused (mixed usage of present and past tense when past tense and past perfect should be used). I am French, so it's not my place to advise you on English, however, I have been using a tool that helped me correct my sentences (Grammarly). It goes further than word and google's spelling check.

Know that in any case, I was able to read and understand your story easily.
If you spot any bad points in my story, please tell them to me. I would love to hear what I can improve!

Good luck! And keep going !

      ButtonsWrites haha thank you so much for reading😘 and its ok i love me some flood comments that way i know my reader's thoughts on the story so far haha! I'll make sure to check them out one by one 😂

          yu_chan_desu thank you so much, for the review, ill do yours.
          edit: It's been reviewed by the name BlindBandit, its done.

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