Mel_Aniv I'm swapping with you I've already done it I assume you are going to do your review as well I'll expect it today? I hope but I really like your story I gave it two power stones. 👍

      moon_cancer15 sure! I’ll have it posted by tomorrow. I have to write some chapters today, then I have one more swap before yours. But I swear I will have yours posted by tomorrow😁 If you’d like, you can wait to do mine until I post yours before you do mine; I don’t mind😁

        BlaccLotus sure, but I must warn you that you’re third in line😅 I won’t be able to review your book until tomorrow, if that’s ok? But I will get to it by tomorrow. The other two only have a few chapters(20 or so), so I will definitely get to yours bu tomorrow.

            MissyRailae Reviewed! I enjoyed reading your chapters till the end. I was surprised in a good way by the [spoiler] early death, time-travel, and the "devil" - which really isn't. You will find more details on what I liked in your story in my review. I initially disliked the main character, but it can be seen she was made purposely arrogant and unlikeable due to her horrible personality. However, she starts to change soon enough. I expect a lot for the character development. Let's see!

            In addition, I would like to point out that there are some sentences that sound a bit awkward, and some tenses that seem misused (mixed usage of present and past tense when past tense and past perfect should be used). I am French, so it's not my place to advise you on English, however, I have been using a tool that helped me correct my sentences (Grammarly). It goes further than word and google's spelling check.

            Know that in any case, I was able to read and understand your story easily.
            If you spot any bad points in my story, please tell them to me. I would love to hear what I can improve!

            Good luck! And keep going !

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