Bunny_Junnie Reviewed yours (check the review). In addition to the review I posted, between us, I also would like to add:
- Some chapters have very lengthy paragraphs. It was hard to read for me. Please consider splitting long paragraphs into 3-5 lines max.
- The first chapter starts with a lot of dialogue. Why not introducing more description so that the reader has more time to slowly assimilate who's who?
- There are many grammar mistakes, even in the synopsis (he fall in love => he falls in love, from then he have to => he has to), please consider running your chapters through an advanced spell-checker. Try Word, or Grammarly (better).

This is my honest review to help you get more readers :)

      Hello all. I've started a new book and would love feedback. I'm open to review swaps if anyone is interested. Here's the link. https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-school-for-the-unimpressive_19777653505214405

      And if you haven't already reviewed my first book, that'll work, too. Here's that link. https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-chronicles-of-the-deadly-dead_19417800106413305

      Thanks! Happy reading!

        Yulainei hiiii! thanks for giving both of my novels a review! left mine just right now hehe

        to other authors who would like to swap, here are my novels:

        Historical/modern reincarnation fantasy romance revenge r18 witches FL
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/revenge-of-the-reincarnated-witch_19730586506223505

        Fantasy romance action comedy fairies weak to strong FL
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/somniate-rise-of-the-faey-queen_19456132606511105

        you can choose either one or like this lovely author, do both! haha thanksss :kiss:

            DaniReese hi! thanks for the review :kiss: i left mine i think yesterday haha

            for those who would also want a review swap, here are my novels:

            Historical/modern reincarnation fantasy romance revenge r18 witches FL
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/revenge-of-the-reincarnated-witch_19730586506223505

            Fantasy romance action comedy fairies weak to strong FL
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/somniate-rise-of-the-faey-queen_19456132606511105

            you can choose either one, or do both! nyahahaha :kissing_closed_eyes:

                Mel_Aniv I'm swapping with you I've already done it I assume you are going to do your review as well I'll expect it today? I hope but I really like your story I gave it two power stones. 👍

                    moon_cancer15 sure! I’ll have it posted by tomorrow. I have to write some chapters today, then I have one more swap before yours. But I swear I will have yours posted by tomorrow😁 If you’d like, you can wait to do mine until I post yours before you do mine; I don’t mind😁

                      BlaccLotus sure, but I must warn you that you’re third in line😅 I won’t be able to review your book until tomorrow, if that’s ok? But I will get to it by tomorrow. The other two only have a few chapters(20 or so), so I will definitely get to yours bu tomorrow.

                          MissyRailae Reviewed! I enjoyed reading your chapters till the end. I was surprised in a good way by the [spoiler] early death, time-travel, and the "devil" - which really isn't. You will find more details on what I liked in your story in my review. I initially disliked the main character, but it can be seen she was made purposely arrogant and unlikeable due to her horrible personality. However, she starts to change soon enough. I expect a lot for the character development. Let's see!

                          In addition, I would like to point out that there are some sentences that sound a bit awkward, and some tenses that seem misused (mixed usage of present and past tense when past tense and past perfect should be used). I am French, so it's not my place to advise you on English, however, I have been using a tool that helped me correct my sentences (Grammarly). It goes further than word and google's spelling check.

                          Know that in any case, I was able to read and understand your story easily.
                          If you spot any bad points in my story, please tell them to me. I would love to hear what I can improve!

                          Good luck! And keep going !

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