sammielane448
Thanks for the review, it is very useful. As for the onomatopeias, if you continue to read the story, you'll see a decrease in their uses. I've come to realize after some time that they were... could be bothersome haha.
Anyway, I'll give it some thought.
Thanks again, mate.
I'll read you later.

      sammielane448 It really helps me a lot to correct some of my mistakes in my own novel! Thank you for giving honest and constructive criticism on my novel! I'm trying my best to edit my novel! Thank you that you pick up my novel to be reviewed and posted on your blog! ^ _ ^

          sammielane448 if you have the time, please review my following novel. I'm both anxious and excited to hear the result.

          Title: Herbs & Lotions – The Busy Life of Alfraed Logick

          Genre: Fantasy

          Synopsis:

          In a world where magic lives and mysterious civilization found...

          Alfraed Logick is the owner of "Herbs & Lotions", a newly opened shop that sells medicine, potion, and lotion, as well as provides customers with free refreshment, all made by himself.

          In developing his new business to become the biggest in the world, he will encounters heroes, kings, elder dragons, demon lords, demigods, and many more, some become trusted friends, some bitter enemies, and one of them is the love of his life.

          But, at the moment, he has to find ways to bring customers to his novel shop and make purchases. This is the story of his busy life to acquire the lifestyle he always dreamed of.

          Release rate: one chapter per week

          Link: http://wbnv.in/a/29fvpdK

              PWS I've added it. There is a bit of a cue though, I will get to every webnovel here, but it might take some time...

                  sammielane448 Hi, I wanted to thank you for clarifying about the use of single inverted commas for marking direct speech in the UK because I was reading something I wrote ten years ago and could not understand why all the dialogues were all in single inverted commas!

                      US_DreamerDon

                      I've reviewed your webnovel. You can read my full review on my blog. The link is below:

                      https://clonereviews.wordpress.com/aristocrat-to-adventurer-2/

                      WordsmithVenerable

                      I'll review your webnovel next, It should be up on Saturday, I'll stop guaranteeing an exact time, because life has a way of making me miss those deadlines, but I'll aim to have it done by 8 pm BST. I might have your review finished by Friday, but it'll probably be Saturday.

                            applelumi I use single inverted commas in my webnovel, almost as a statement. I know that most people now use the double inverted commas, but this is one aspect of British literacy tradition that I'm not willing to let go of XD

                                sammielane448 Hey there! Are you still in for reviews? I'd like for us to go by chapters and give honest opinions on it in discord, if you're interested. Well also leave reviews in WN and chapter comments.

                                    DonDenis I'll add it to my collection now, and review it as soon as I can. I do have quite a few reviews to get through, and I'm writing my own webnovel and, you know, living life, so it will take some time, but every review request on this thread will be got to!

                                        sammielane448 No probs there, do it at your own pace. Thanks in advance.
                                        Also added your blog to my feeds after reading your previous reviews (good work there). Will follow you on Twitter too

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