I would appreciate this a lot! I've recently revised and edited one my older works, and it feels like sometimes I have no idea what I'm doing.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/tempest-and-temptation_20565074406731605###
I would appreciate this a lot! I've recently revised and edited one my older works, and it feels like sometimes I have no idea what I'm doing.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/tempest-and-temptation_20565074406731605###
Yoan_Roturier I'm a few hours late, but as promised I've reviewed Return of the Woodcutter. Spoiler alert, I loved it. You can find the link to the full review below:
https://clonereviews.wordpress.com/return-of-the-woodcutter-2/
US_DreamerDon Yours is the next webnovel I'm reviewing. There was someone above you, but I just checked and they asked for a review swap, not for me to actually review their webnovel. I'm not swapping reviews, at least that's not what this thread's about, so yeah, I guess you jumped the cue.
You can expect my review on either Monday or Tuesday 8 pm BST. I'm quite busy so while I'll aim to do it by Monday, I don't want you to be annoyed it's not finished until Tuesday.
To everyone else, I'm really sorry for taking some time to get to you, but I'm just one guy and I want to give each webnovel the same level of attention. I also want to keep up with my own webnovel writing schedule and maintain my other life commitments. I hope you understand. It might take me a while to get to them, but every single webnovel posted on this thread will eventually get a review from me. That counts for anyone else who posts on here. I hope to continue reviewing long-term, so if you plan on writing long term, I will get to it eventually.
NotBeatrix I've added it to my library, and I'll review it as soon as I can. It might take some time to get to it, quite a few people have requested reviews, but if you don't mind the wait, I will absolutely get to it as soon as I'm able.
Totally get it! Take all the time you need, and I mean it. I know life gets busy.
sammielane448
Thanks for the review, it is very useful. As for the onomatopeias, if you continue to read the story, you'll see a decrease in their uses. I've come to realize after some time that they were... could be bothersome haha.
Anyway, I'll give it some thought.
Thanks again, mate.
I'll read you later.
sammielane448 It really helps me a lot to correct some of my mistakes in my own novel! Thank you for giving honest and constructive criticism on my novel! I'm trying my best to edit my novel! Thank you that you pick up my novel to be reviewed and posted on your blog! ^ _ ^
sammielane448 Thank you for the update. I'm looking forward to it (while bracing myself as well)
sammielane448 if you have the time, please review my following novel. I'm both anxious and excited to hear the result.
Title: Herbs & Lotions – The Busy Life of Alfraed Logick
Genre: Fantasy
Synopsis:
In a world where magic lives and mysterious civilization found...
Alfraed Logick is the owner of "Herbs & Lotions", a newly opened shop that sells medicine, potion, and lotion, as well as provides customers with free refreshment, all made by himself.
In developing his new business to become the biggest in the world, he will encounters heroes, kings, elder dragons, demon lords, demigods, and many more, some become trusted friends, some bitter enemies, and one of them is the love of his life.
But, at the moment, he has to find ways to bring customers to his novel shop and make purchases. This is the story of his busy life to acquire the lifestyle he always dreamed of.
Release rate: one chapter per week
Link: http://wbnv.in/a/29fvpdK
PWS I've added it. There is a bit of a cue though, I will get to every webnovel here, but it might take some time...
Thank you so much for initiating this, I have just started writing my WSA novel Toxic Beauty, hoping to get some help.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/toxic-beauty._20528022605152205
sammielane448 Hi, I wanted to thank you for clarifying about the use of single inverted commas for marking direct speech in the UK because I was reading something I wrote ten years ago and could not understand why all the dialogues were all in single inverted commas!
im really, really sorry for giving you more work on top of this pile of books, but reading the in depth review you gave of Scarlette Overland, i couldn't help myself. That sort of review is just what I need to get feedback on what I could be doing better
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-impurity's-ascension_20104942505517105
Thank you so much!
I've reviewed your webnovel. You can read my full review on my blog. The link is below:
https://clonereviews.wordpress.com/aristocrat-to-adventurer-2/
I'll review your webnovel next, It should be up on Saturday, I'll stop guaranteeing an exact time, because life has a way of making me miss those deadlines, but I'll aim to have it done by 8 pm BST. I might have your review finished by Friday, but it'll probably be Saturday.
Wookiesmuggler Don't worry about it, I'll add your webnovel to my collection and review it as soon as I can.
applelumi I use single inverted commas in my webnovel, almost as a statement. I know that most people now use the double inverted commas, but this is one aspect of British literacy tradition that I'm not willing to let go of XD
sammielane448 Hey there! Are you still in for reviews? I'd like for us to go by chapters and give honest opinions on it in discord, if you're interested. Well also leave reviews in WN and chapter comments.
DonDenis That sounds good, but it's not what this thread's about, you know?
sammielane448 Ok, scratch that, I didn't get it well initially. On your offer, here's my link
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/19721720105042305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315142085
It's still on right?
DonDenis I'll add it to my collection now, and review it as soon as I can. I do have quite a few reviews to get through, and I'm writing my own webnovel and, you know, living life, so it will take some time, but every review request on this thread will be got to!
sammielane448 No probs there, do it at your own pace. Thanks in advance.
Also added your blog to my feeds after reading your previous reviews (good work there). Will follow you on Twitter too