sammielane448 yes, very. I already fixed one issue thanks to your help(Levi’s entrance). I honestly probably won’t change the lack of information about their original world in the beginning because it’s our world(which we’re used to), and info gets sprinkled in throughout the book in memories and comparisons, but I found your opinions very helpful. It was much more insightful than any other reviews I’ve gotten so far, and one can definitely tell that you Actually read the whole ten chapters. I greatly appreciate the time and effort you put into the review. I did want to tell you that readers find out that Atlas is Matt in chapter 11😁, although it takes a while for Serenity to find out who he is(drove my readers crazy😆). And I will be removing the ( ) from the beginning today because you’re right: it does break the immersion into the story. Since I wrote in 3rd POV, I thought I could get away with it, but I realized that you were correct after I went through and re-read it with your perspective in mind. I thank you Very much for your time and efforts into helping me make my story better❤️🥰❤️

Edit: I thought I should mention that the reason behind some words being capitalized for accentuation is because bold and italic doesn’t show up in the app, and I wanted the reading experience to be the same whether it was online or in the app. I only mention this because you might come across other authors doing something similar. Thank you again for the great review❤️

    Yoan_Roturier I'm a few hours late, but as promised I've reviewed Return of the Woodcutter. Spoiler alert, I loved it. You can find the link to the full review below:

    https://clonereviews.wordpress.com/return-of-the-woodcutter-2/

    US_DreamerDon Yours is the next webnovel I'm reviewing. There was someone above you, but I just checked and they asked for a review swap, not for me to actually review their webnovel. I'm not swapping reviews, at least that's not what this thread's about, so yeah, I guess you jumped the cue.

    You can expect my review on either Monday or Tuesday 8 pm BST. I'm quite busy so while I'll aim to do it by Monday, I don't want you to be annoyed it's not finished until Tuesday.

    To everyone else, I'm really sorry for taking some time to get to you, but I'm just one guy and I want to give each webnovel the same level of attention. I also want to keep up with my own webnovel writing schedule and maintain my other life commitments. I hope you understand. It might take me a while to get to them, but every single webnovel posted on this thread will eventually get a review from me. That counts for anyone else who posts on here. I hope to continue reviewing long-term, so if you plan on writing long term, I will get to it eventually.

          NotBeatrix I've added it to my library, and I'll review it as soon as I can. It might take some time to get to it, quite a few people have requested reviews, but if you don't mind the wait, I will absolutely get to it as soon as I'm able.

              sammielane448
              Thanks for the review, it is very useful. As for the onomatopeias, if you continue to read the story, you'll see a decrease in their uses. I've come to realize after some time that they were... could be bothersome haha.
              Anyway, I'll give it some thought.
              Thanks again, mate.
              I'll read you later.

                  sammielane448 It really helps me a lot to correct some of my mistakes in my own novel! Thank you for giving honest and constructive criticism on my novel! I'm trying my best to edit my novel! Thank you that you pick up my novel to be reviewed and posted on your blog! ^ _ ^

                      sammielane448 if you have the time, please review my following novel. I'm both anxious and excited to hear the result.

                      Title: Herbs & Lotions – The Busy Life of Alfraed Logick

                      Genre: Fantasy

                      Synopsis:

                      In a world where magic lives and mysterious civilization found...

                      Alfraed Logick is the owner of "Herbs & Lotions", a newly opened shop that sells medicine, potion, and lotion, as well as provides customers with free refreshment, all made by himself.

                      In developing his new business to become the biggest in the world, he will encounters heroes, kings, elder dragons, demon lords, demigods, and many more, some become trusted friends, some bitter enemies, and one of them is the love of his life.

                      But, at the moment, he has to find ways to bring customers to his novel shop and make purchases. This is the story of his busy life to acquire the lifestyle he always dreamed of.

                      Release rate: one chapter per week

                      Link: http://wbnv.in/a/29fvpdK

                          PWS I've added it. There is a bit of a cue though, I will get to every webnovel here, but it might take some time...

                              sammielane448 Hi, I wanted to thank you for clarifying about the use of single inverted commas for marking direct speech in the UK because I was reading something I wrote ten years ago and could not understand why all the dialogues were all in single inverted commas!

                                  US_DreamerDon

                                  I've reviewed your webnovel. You can read my full review on my blog. The link is below:

                                  https://clonereviews.wordpress.com/aristocrat-to-adventurer-2/

                                  WordsmithVenerable

                                  I'll review your webnovel next, It should be up on Saturday, I'll stop guaranteeing an exact time, because life has a way of making me miss those deadlines, but I'll aim to have it done by 8 pm BST. I might have your review finished by Friday, but it'll probably be Saturday.

                                        applelumi I use single inverted commas in my webnovel, almost as a statement. I know that most people now use the double inverted commas, but this is one aspect of British literacy tradition that I'm not willing to let go of XD

                                            sammielane448 Hey there! Are you still in for reviews? I'd like for us to go by chapters and give honest opinions on it in discord, if you're interested. Well also leave reviews in WN and chapter comments.

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