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shadowdrake27 Her? I'm a guy, dude.

Also, I was copying YulongYuXianTaiyin's sentence and changing a few words, so he obviously can't see the irony of criticizing me for not being able to form sentences.

    Tomoyuki "Harem isn't my thing, BUT I'd tell people to stop reading them..."

    It should be 'and' or 'so'. If you used 'but', then the first part would have to be "harem is my thing".

    Also, 'he'? I'm a female.

    And yes, we don't get along. You restarted the thread many days after by responding to mine that didn't need a response. And you have a habit of not only always disagreeing with me, but a big problem with not listening (you've done this to others, too, and I'm sure they noticed at the time). Bashing? You always start it. Whether we're on the same thread or not, I thought we would continue to ignore each other, but you had to pick a fight. Please leave your negativity away from me. Thanks.

    P.S., This does not require a response.

      Okay, she then. Also, I was being sarcastic and copying your sentence simply to point out that your "brussel sprouts" example don't make sense because no one will consider harem "healthy." Also, obviously it was a typo. I meant "Harem isn't my thing, BUT I'd not tell people to stop reading them." Somehow I forgot the "not" but hey, instead of pointing out if there was a typo or you know, disagreeing or whatever, you decided to attack me. No one bashed you, I certainly didn't. I didn't attack your intelligence, I only disagreed with you. Unlike you, who told me to go back to school. Then only did I respond with an attack of my own.

      I didn't pick a fight. I simply pointed out the hole in your logic, but if you consider that "bashing" then you have issues, lady.

        Happy_AltRight No idea, we're talking about a girl who claims that harem is healthy.

        And on the issue of not listening to others, I think she is quite the hypocrite.

        Misguided_Rooster Do you seriously think it's healthy and wise for Cultivation Chat Group to have harem in it? Because that's what she was arguing, and when I pointed out the hole in her logic, she attacked me.

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          Benny_Manatee
          I guess so. But these novels don't bother to elaborate on whether they intend to make it a polyamorous relationship or not. Harem is almost always defined as the MC having a plethora of female love interests. And the MC never bothers to choose one because he can't "bear to break the other women's hearts," which is a cop-out.

          Why must those women have to share the same man while the man does not allow the women to indulge themselves with other men? Does that even make sense?

          And in most cases, the author indicates that the women are fine with sharing the man because they feel that the man "cannot possibly be limited to one woman". And to that... Why? Why do they have such low self-esteem, and why do these so-called morally upright MCs take advantage of these women with such low self-esteem?

            Junior_Sundar
            This! I always wondered why not. If harem, why not a polyamorous one? Isn't it more interesting if everyone is into everyone and all the girls have fun with eachother?

            It certainly sounds cooler than a bunch of girls and some boring unattractive dude who can't pick who he likes. Someone really needs to write this. A harem like this would be great!

              Damn... that would break the immersion though, if I'm reading about a guy with a harem fighting against the world and then it suddenly becomes an orgy, tf am I to do? ๐Ÿ˜จ

                Dzeeck Life isn't only about dual-cultivation (in an orgy it would probably be quintuple-cultivation or even more, like ....sextuple-cultivation ๐Ÿคฃ) young Daoist, it's about support, love (for the country), and many other things under the heavens. There is no place for happiness on the road to immortality.
                EternalNightLotus No it doesn't, the women (harem members) never do Xing (/jack) shit, they just get into trouble and force the HPOC (horny piece of shit -> ML) to save them, so it doesn't break the immersion that the HPOC is fighting against the world alone. ๐Ÿคจ

                A great majority of stories on here are trash without involving harems at all.

                That said, it's not the topic, but the writing/story that defines if a story is good or not. I, personally, dislike the way that Webnovel, and other's of a similar ilk, encourage authors to churn out stories as fast as possible. This simply encourages bad writing.

                Even if I write a novel normally, it needs work once done. Sometimes I change something in the story which means I should go back and edit something from earlier. WN's format means that editing/proofreading is almost discouraged, lowering the quality of even the few decent reads on here for the most part.

                Yes, before you ask, I have a couple of books on here, but one was fully written beforehand, and the other I've been writing as a spoof, although it's turned out quite well, if I say so myself. That being said, the version on here is basically a first draft. Once it's done, I will be going through it, editing, re-writing it to make it properly 'readable'.

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