FatHitler Thank you so much for letting me know where the story is going wrong. I do admit that my first chapters need fixing.

The very first chapter was about a past memory of protagonist. It is explained through a dream. That is why it seems stranded.

About next 9 chapters, I wanted to explain the daily life of the protagonist. The volume name itself gives the general idea about it.

I will once again go through my chapters again and try to make it less wordy ^ ^

Last thing I want to say is sob sob I really got improved in the later chapters...

    FatHitler Before I start... What should I exactly have to do?šŸ¤”... I mean I should fix first 10 chapters right?

        Shreya2711

        not an expert or a good reader. but what i would recommend is to make things more clear less wordy i guess and make them more cleaner. there is no spelling mistakes which is good, but the sentences sometimes just confuse me or don't make sense for me.

        the first chapters are the most important in my opinion. so you should try to make them better. if a person reads till 10 chapter hes already invested into the story and is going to overlook some things and be more patient.

        i get that your trying to reveal the time travel and other thing in the future chaps and that thing seems to be interesting, but the first chaps didn't grab. they confused me, but i would say im not a really regular reader and if a thing doesn't grab me in the 1-3 chaps i go. it did grab me with the medicine thing and the mask thing and the business things seemed interesting, but the wording confused me and ruined it for me.

        and definetly going to try to read it again when the wording gets better.

        so i dont know. do whatever and have fun.

        wishing luck from Fat Hiter.

            FatHitler I am glad that you liked the medicine and business idea! I will surely fix my beginning chapters, I don't wanna lose readers like you who patiently read my novel! Thank you for the advice, it helped to solve my confusion and most important problem.

                9 days later

                FatHitler So, since you are picking random stuff, I might as well try to recommend my random work. But, it still only have 3 chapters on, a lot less than you asked...

                But, if you are interested in a way shorter read than you asked, here is the link:
                https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-z-finite_20896434106083105

                Synopsis:
                A story about a young guy, who goes in a adventure in search for some magic stones and find himself adrift in the dangerous events of the world around him.

                If you are not interested you can just ignore it, sorry for it being too short.

                    4 days later

                    Random novel generator? Get a list of novel names in text format, plug it into a random name picker? You can try finding it online?

                    Or if you want novels that will harm your eyes, you can try reading my original works on my profile: https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4301000478?appId=10. Seriously, they are bad, so bad ... read at your own risk.

                    If you just want some novels recommendation ... maybe drop a description of your type of novel and see if we can find a match?

                      FatHitler You are just the kind of reader I want. Honest about your opinions.

                      I shall apologize to you in advance as there aren't 100 chapters, but I think that's a good thing. There are 14 chapters so far so it is easy for you to decide whether you would like to get invested in the story or not. I release two chapters a week (so you're not going to be bored a lot).

                      What's my story about? Well, I'm glad you thought of asking (or not). It's about descendants. Think of them as demigods. But demigods of which pantheon, you wonder? Well, all of them.

                      I want to create a story that connects all the pantheons of the worldā€”Greek, Norse, Egyptian, Hindu, Shinto, Slavic, Celtic, African, Korean, and moreā€”and brings them together to the modern world. I'm heavily researching to include more pantheons. It's got action. It has romance (for you lovestruck fools). It has a slice of Sherlock Holmes (the main character is a smart young man). It has a dash of Jason Bourne/John Wick. It's got mystery and epic fight scenes. And it has a gay magical talking car who gets involved in an intense car chase.

                      Why do I recommend this story:
                      - It's got a great worldbuilding.
                      - You are going to have more questions than answers, but that is intentional. I want to slowly reveal the world. Kind of like a Sherlock Holmes story where the pieces come together.
                      - Fantastic action sequences.

                      If you do enjoy it, I would love for you to add it to your collections.

                      https://www.webnovel.com/book/pantheon_18184314405602505

                          Hi, I'm a new author and I'm trying to improve my writing technique, any comment on my first work will be welcomed. Thanks.
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                          Title: Chronicles of the Drakes
                          Genre: Steampunk Fantasy
                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/chronicles-of-the-drakes_20329297905264305
                          Synopsis:
                          At the dawn of the 20th century, the world underwent a technological boom, as well as an increase in warfare, giving rise to a war economy, controlled by the dark intentions of shadowy organisations.
                          In Albion, one of the most advanced and industrialised nations, a soldier, Ruslan Drake, heir to one of the greatest inventors of his time, is drawn into this power struggle.
                          Seriously wounded in a battle, he returns home, recovering thanks to the advanced technology developed by his family. But he soon discovers that London, his hometown, is an even more dangerous place than any warzone.
                          Ruslan will be drawn into the power struggles and influences of London's secret societies, leading him to discover that his injuries may not have been entirely fortuitous, but due to the will of a third party.
                          Now, with his family in danger, he will have to plunge into the abyss of deceit and betrayal of the shadow power struggle if he is to protect his loved ones, and find himself plunged into a new war, this time on the very streets of his homeland.
                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/chronicles-of-the-drakes_20329297905264305

                            I don't know if it fits into your description but this is realistic fiction. Perhaps it's worth a try.
                            Synopsis : Do you know how we've all made mistakes? Some worse than others. Imperfection is key, journey through the ends of the Earth, and not a single perfect soul shall be found.
                            We are different, look past the mistakes and there you'll find beauty.
                            Ever met someone confusing, complicated, and ridiculously annoying? , Say hi to Jeremy.

                            And then there's Natasha, nice, loving, and simple with buried pasts she's afraid to face.

                            He's a professional model and she's an amateur.
                            He's rude and exhausting while she's gentle and calm.
                            He's dealing with heartbreak and she's a single mom.
                            Thanks to the agency their lives they have to suck it up and deal with each other.

                            They are both forced to share a house, not the best thing ever but that begins the journey to a life of perfect imperfection.
                            Who cares perfect is overrated anyway...
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                                FatHitler Please try this one:

                                Title: Herbs & Lotions ā€“ The Busy Life of Alfraed Logick

                                Genre: Fantasy

                                Synopsis:
                                In a world where magic lives and mysterious civilization found, Alfraed Logick opens ā€œHerbs & Lotionsā€, a shop selling various medicine, potion, and lotion.

                                Under guidance of a mysterious master, the young man becomes an adept healer who possesses abnormal strength and stamina, fluency in ancient language, and willingness to go the extra mile. With these abilities he promises to make the shop the best in the world, and live the lifestyle of his dream.

                                In his endeavor to promote his products to the world and earn extra income, he will unexpectedly have encounters with heroes, kings, elder dragons, demon lords, demigods, and many more, some become trusted friends, some bitter enemies, and one of them is the love of his life.

                                This is the story of Alfraed Logick's busy life.

                                Release rate: at least two chapter per week

                                Link: http://wbnv.in/a/29fvpdK

                                    11 days later

                                    I don't have the link but here are names to some you might like

                                    Awakening of the HollowShadow
                                    The Wanderer: mystery of the young Master

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